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A awesome chapter, full of power and some nice dramatic twists. You described Vincent's struggle and his feelings during the battles very well. I'm very curious how his journey in the New World will start. Good job again, only check for typos a bit more, there are a few, but nothing dramatic. You creativity is really a pleasure.
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