Looks like things get a little complicated for a new friendship, if only things were that easy...
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Category Story / Fantasy
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Excellent chapter again! I love your ideas and this chapter had some nice surprises like the end of the battle in the Dream Foundation or this new two appearances on the end of the chapter. I'm sure this will be furthermore very good. And I liked how you described Egon's and Vincent's ability to teleport, this is very good and logical. Such details are good for a story. Even attacks and abilities can have a good description and a logical background, that make everything way more unique and more nice to read. Very good!
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