This was pretty cute. Nrashm and Rreech's antics were fun to read, and they had a nice mix of animal-human thing going. I'd want to say that Lou seemed too unequivocally mean, but I think that only mostly came through in some parts of his dialogue.

But yeah, that was fun to read. I couldn't guess if they'd be alien furries or cryptid-mystery-animals or what until the parents actually appeared, so that was fun too.