My.S.T. adventure series follows many stories based on fictional characters.
It's for all ages so let me know how does the story sounds to keep writing.
Any comments are welcome
Ultimate Journey Ark number 1
The beginning of the end of a dream.
There is a crimson sky filled with stars shinning through it with all their light.
'It's a normal scenery right now... wait. why am i thinking like that? what is this gloomy feeling i have?'
I turn my head towards a shadowy figure, it looks familiar to me but I can’t remember why. I can feel him smiling at me and that comforts me.
- Ready?- the shadowy being says
'what do you mean? Why do i feel so comfortable at your side? what are you?' so many questions flooded my mind but i can only open my mouth to say:
-It's time, you sure about it? are you with me on this? -
He answers confident and serious
-Forever and Ever. Never alone again.-
Now I feel weird. I stare at the sky again and see a darkness starting to cover some of the stars. That darkness seems to be shaped like a pair of wings yet I am not sure.
-Nineteen... eighty... fai....v...- ghostly voice at the back of my mind hammers me with a sudden pain.
-Augh! Huh?- was my only response and everything became white and i realized what was going on.
Suddenly, I am in my classroom and I understand that I was daydreaming. I felt confused by that shadowy image in my dream and I felt terrible for the whole scene in there as it was something I was gonna do. I saw my teacher in front of me, she is a plump woman with a kind face and a stern voice. I could hear her perfectly but my heart and soul were still absent. Guilt was filling my chest now, I have to hide it deep within so I could recover myself and play fool again. I had to sustain this masquerade and since this is the third time this dream hit me I am getting the hang on it.
-What happened in 1985 Mr. Russo? Don't make me repeat myself.- Miss Mercedes, my teacher, asked me.
'Please, Repeat the question again miss. I need to play dumb for a few more seconds since i didn't hear your lesson at all. Sorry for not being sincere.'
-Last chance, What happened in Cordoba in 1985, July 9?
‘Miss Mercedes you are nice but I want to leave right now’
My name is Simon and surname you know it already since Miss Mercedes said it.
'How shall I respond to her? Damn, bell. Why are you taking forever to ring'
-Sorry Miss, I've been a little drowsy lately.- I was being sincere there, at least a more sincere than usual.
A few snickers could be heard but no one laughed. The teacher seemed a little angry.
Then the bell rang at 14.05. 'Saved by the bell, 5 minutes late dammit.'
Everyone picked their things up and left the classroom as fast as they could. Except me, I was held back by the teacher calling me.
I was ready to leave but she told me to wait. When the classroom was empty she talked.
-Are you sleeping properly?-
-Yes miss, It’s that… I don’t know how to tell, I am still having these strange nightmares where I end up staring at a red sky feeling terribly guilty about something.-
-This is the third time it happened this month, right?-
-Yes, I guess the other teachers already told you.-
-Of course, is everything ok at home?-
-Yes miss. I didn’t tell them of this yet. When I get home I just forget about it.-
-That’s unusual. Try to have a good night sleep, stop staying up late watching movies, otherwise I’ll have to talk to your parents. Or else, you can talk to me if something is troubling you.-
-It’s ok miss. Thanks for listening. I’ll try to not repeat this again.-
-I hope so. You are a good student and I wouldn’t like to see you that distracted.-
After that Little talk, she dismissed me and I started my slow way home.
The streets of Salta City, my hometown, were crowded with people. This city is a beautiful tourist attraction. The city's downtown is full with monuments, squares, restaurants, shops and stores. My school is part of a historical building, a Church named San Francisco Church. It has gothic design but and is painted with three tones of brown and red colors. Heh, our school uniforms has to a strong Brown color and beige color in order to match with the garnments San Francisco wore while in life. They are not ugly but I didn’t like them neither.
I walked a few blocks trying to get to a videogame store where i used to spend sometime after school. The owner is an old acquantice of mine and always let me play his new acquisitions. The way to the store was crowded with tourists and a lot of people that went shopping. I made my way through them until i got to the flea market where the store was located. When i got there, the owner named Susan saluted me with a hug.
-How are you doing and why so late? I thought you weren't gonna make it.- she said.
-I fell asleep in class again.-
-Are you feeling sick?-
-No, I don’t think that’s the problem.-
-If you keep doing that you'll have to see some practicioner.-
-Yes, I know. By the way, did you receive the new Resident Evil? I wanna see it. please.- I begged.
-Here it is.-
She let me play there since it's a good publicity.
After 20 minutes of fighting to keep the main character alive, I gave up, said my farewell and left for home. I left the store and resumed my way home when I got to the corner where the traffic light is green for pedestrians. When I was going to cross the street I raised my sight to the sky and saw two shadows there.
‘something is strange is going on’ I thought
It's for all ages so let me know how does the story sounds to keep writing.
Any comments are welcome
Ultimate Journey Ark number 1
The beginning of the end of a dream.
There is a crimson sky filled with stars shinning through it with all their light.
'It's a normal scenery right now... wait. why am i thinking like that? what is this gloomy feeling i have?'
I turn my head towards a shadowy figure, it looks familiar to me but I can’t remember why. I can feel him smiling at me and that comforts me.
- Ready?- the shadowy being says
'what do you mean? Why do i feel so comfortable at your side? what are you?' so many questions flooded my mind but i can only open my mouth to say:
-It's time, you sure about it? are you with me on this? -
He answers confident and serious
-Forever and Ever. Never alone again.-
Now I feel weird. I stare at the sky again and see a darkness starting to cover some of the stars. That darkness seems to be shaped like a pair of wings yet I am not sure.
-Nineteen... eighty... fai....v...- ghostly voice at the back of my mind hammers me with a sudden pain.
-Augh! Huh?- was my only response and everything became white and i realized what was going on.
Suddenly, I am in my classroom and I understand that I was daydreaming. I felt confused by that shadowy image in my dream and I felt terrible for the whole scene in there as it was something I was gonna do. I saw my teacher in front of me, she is a plump woman with a kind face and a stern voice. I could hear her perfectly but my heart and soul were still absent. Guilt was filling my chest now, I have to hide it deep within so I could recover myself and play fool again. I had to sustain this masquerade and since this is the third time this dream hit me I am getting the hang on it.
-What happened in 1985 Mr. Russo? Don't make me repeat myself.- Miss Mercedes, my teacher, asked me.
'Please, Repeat the question again miss. I need to play dumb for a few more seconds since i didn't hear your lesson at all. Sorry for not being sincere.'
-Last chance, What happened in Cordoba in 1985, July 9?
‘Miss Mercedes you are nice but I want to leave right now’
My name is Simon and surname you know it already since Miss Mercedes said it.
'How shall I respond to her? Damn, bell. Why are you taking forever to ring'
-Sorry Miss, I've been a little drowsy lately.- I was being sincere there, at least a more sincere than usual.
A few snickers could be heard but no one laughed. The teacher seemed a little angry.
Then the bell rang at 14.05. 'Saved by the bell, 5 minutes late dammit.'
Everyone picked their things up and left the classroom as fast as they could. Except me, I was held back by the teacher calling me.
I was ready to leave but she told me to wait. When the classroom was empty she talked.
-Are you sleeping properly?-
-Yes miss, It’s that… I don’t know how to tell, I am still having these strange nightmares where I end up staring at a red sky feeling terribly guilty about something.-
-This is the third time it happened this month, right?-
-Yes, I guess the other teachers already told you.-
-Of course, is everything ok at home?-
-Yes miss. I didn’t tell them of this yet. When I get home I just forget about it.-
-That’s unusual. Try to have a good night sleep, stop staying up late watching movies, otherwise I’ll have to talk to your parents. Or else, you can talk to me if something is troubling you.-
-It’s ok miss. Thanks for listening. I’ll try to not repeat this again.-
-I hope so. You are a good student and I wouldn’t like to see you that distracted.-
After that Little talk, she dismissed me and I started my slow way home.
The streets of Salta City, my hometown, were crowded with people. This city is a beautiful tourist attraction. The city's downtown is full with monuments, squares, restaurants, shops and stores. My school is part of a historical building, a Church named San Francisco Church. It has gothic design but and is painted with three tones of brown and red colors. Heh, our school uniforms has to a strong Brown color and beige color in order to match with the garnments San Francisco wore while in life. They are not ugly but I didn’t like them neither.
I walked a few blocks trying to get to a videogame store where i used to spend sometime after school. The owner is an old acquantice of mine and always let me play his new acquisitions. The way to the store was crowded with tourists and a lot of people that went shopping. I made my way through them until i got to the flea market where the store was located. When i got there, the owner named Susan saluted me with a hug.
-How are you doing and why so late? I thought you weren't gonna make it.- she said.
-I fell asleep in class again.-
-Are you feeling sick?-
-No, I don’t think that’s the problem.-
-If you keep doing that you'll have to see some practicioner.-
-Yes, I know. By the way, did you receive the new Resident Evil? I wanna see it. please.- I begged.
-Here it is.-
She let me play there since it's a good publicity.
After 20 minutes of fighting to keep the main character alive, I gave up, said my farewell and left for home. I left the store and resumed my way home when I got to the corner where the traffic light is green for pedestrians. When I was going to cross the street I raised my sight to the sky and saw two shadows there.
‘something is strange is going on’ I thought
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