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Well here's the finished version, I had a free morning due to getting my timetable confused with last weeks...
Daora's head came out terribly in the second panel, and my pen began to run out by the third. Still, I'd prefer to upload the entire sequence than have missing panels. I'd like to say more about how I don't like the second and third panels but I've got to be somewhere so I'll edit this later.
Kushala Daora here was just going through his regular routine of devouring entire ecosystems when he met his first pack of Baggi. Not knowing about their Comatose-inducing venom he fell asleep before he'd finished consuming the entire pack. How inconsiderate. Unfortunately for the remaining baggi this means he's stuck until The sleep effect wears off or until he can wriggle out after the bulge in daora's midsection has shrunk down a bit. Needless to day this appears to be quite a traumatic experience for him.
I always appreciate comments and constructive criticism, feel free to tell me how or where I can improve.
Kushala Daora, Baggi and Monster Hunter are © Capcom
Daora's head came out terribly in the second panel, and my pen began to run out by the third. Still, I'd prefer to upload the entire sequence than have missing panels. I'd like to say more about how I don't like the second and third panels but I've got to be somewhere so I'll edit this later.
Kushala Daora here was just going through his regular routine of devouring entire ecosystems when he met his first pack of Baggi. Not knowing about their Comatose-inducing venom he fell asleep before he'd finished consuming the entire pack. How inconsiderate. Unfortunately for the remaining baggi this means he's stuck until The sleep effect wears off or until he can wriggle out after the bulge in daora's midsection has shrunk down a bit. Needless to day this appears to be quite a traumatic experience for him.
I always appreciate comments and constructive criticism, feel free to tell me how or where I can improve.
Kushala Daora, Baggi and Monster Hunter are © Capcom
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Vore
Species Western Dragon
Size 3472 x 5440px
File Size 4.17 MB
I'm really impressed by this one, especially that last panel. It may be cause I'm partial to Kushy in general, but this one is excellent.
Regarding the second panel: From my perspective the head looks fine, I think what might be causing it to look off is the neck. It appears shorter/more stocky than in the other panels. Prey-bulge is accountable for its thickness which makes sense, so I think the underlying problem is that its a tad short, and there are less neck-panels (for lack of a better word).
That's my thought anyway, so don't quote me on it, I'm no professional
Aargh, now I want to start drawing some monhun too.
Regarding the second panel: From my perspective the head looks fine, I think what might be causing it to look off is the neck. It appears shorter/more stocky than in the other panels. Prey-bulge is accountable for its thickness which makes sense, so I think the underlying problem is that its a tad short, and there are less neck-panels (for lack of a better word).
That's my thought anyway, so don't quote me on it, I'm no professional
Aargh, now I want to start drawing some monhun too.
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