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Do me a favor and pretend you never saw this... Please?
Finally managed to locate the Thursday Writing Prompt I'd seen mention of, without needing to figure out how to ask about it. Hooray for excessive insecurity!
Although the furriness of this piece is questionable, I would be perfectly within my rights to argue for at least one of the characters.
Content warnings:
Not-particularly-good-ness, but it was my first try.
ENJOY!
Do me a favor and pretend you never saw this... Please?
Finally managed to locate the Thursday Writing Prompt I'd seen mention of, without needing to figure out how to ask about it. Hooray for excessive insecurity!
Although the furriness of this piece is questionable, I would be perfectly within my rights to argue for at least one of the characters.
Content warnings:
Not-particularly-good-ness, but it was my first try.
ENJOY!
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.8 kB
Listed in Folders
Very, very interesting. Had too read some lines twice after I reached the ending. There's possibly many ways to read this, but I think a suitable alternative title to this little story would be: 'Young Satan'. 'Mike' and 'Sir' might be some other center characters from the Bible. Nice touch. This was very interesting read, I enjoyed myself.
I understood this is your first prompt. Welcome, hope you enjoy yourself, both writing and reading.
I understood this is your first prompt. Welcome, hope you enjoy yourself, both writing and reading.
Thank you. I was hoping to keep the ending a secret until the very last line, so it would be a sort of plot twist. I know I'd read this differently the first time if I knew who the characters were in advance.
SPOILERS:
The first speaker is God.
The other speaker is Lucifer. He's got a horned satyr fursona, so this story is officially furry.
'Mike' is Micheal (The angel who struck Lucifer out of heaven and replaced him).
'That poor kid' is Jesus.
SPOILERS:
Very interesting, much easier after I peaked at the spoilers so I reread it.
Much more enjoyable the second time around.
Very internal dialogue-esque, sort of the angel and devil on the shoulder.
It was a little jarring to have absolutely no descriptions, but after the second read it seemed to fit.
Much more enjoyable the second time around.
Very internal dialogue-esque, sort of the angel and devil on the shoulder.
It was a little jarring to have absolutely no descriptions, but after the second read it seemed to fit.
What I find interesting about this piece of literature is that you aren't exactly alone in coming up with the basic premise. There's already a meme going around called "Good guy Lucifer" which tries to showcase all of the good he's done or reinterpret the character. Though most of it is just a natural backlash against the biblical God that takes notice of how remarkably innocent Lucifer seems when you look at his actions.
http://www.quickmeme.com/Good-Guy-L.....ular/?upcoming
http://www.quickmeme.com/Good-Guy-L.....ular/?upcoming
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