LOL awesomeness :D

Eh, the little start n' stop thing you got in the beginning isn't something I'd consider my bag, but there are a few redeeming qualities (like once it picks up.. Still start and stop, but more catchy in the midst of things)

And I like the mood, like as if the Opposition was a rival gang and both gangs were going to have a fight or something. (I can see if as the movie scene opener for a film about gangs) Or as you said it, a rival company on the other side of the street... WITH BASEBALL BATS AND CHAINS.

HI I'M TALKING TOO MUCH.

I OUGHTA SWING A PIPE WRENCH IN YOUR GENERAL DIRECTION.

Yeah, haha. It's not really one of my favorites, but it scrapes through. Good filler. :>

WELL IT'S 2006 SO YOU BETTER POST IT ANYWAY

Dang pretty cool. It think it needs just a bit more going on, like how Daft Punk keep things simple and busy at the same time. Also there's totally room for that guitar to go into a more of a solo.

If I could actually play a guitar, I'd work with it. :B

AFTERTHOUGHT

Actually, I think a guitar solo would be too over the top, it doesn't bring in the energy to really warrant it. Guitar-vocoded lyrics? Little more acceptable.

Yeah mean like a talk box? That'd rock too. If ever you return this tune you totally need to do record real drums too.

I'd totally need to learn real drums. ):

That's what drummer Bobby from down the road is for! Just tell him your mUm is making pancakes and I'm sure you can work out a delicious deal.

Bobbies are as good as extinct in Village-Town Queensland. I'll just have to fake my way out.

I agree with Edge: needs moar guitar solo. Otherwise, this is funky and quite enjoyable. I'm gonna try drumming this later, cause it sounds fun.