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Test #09652
Supervisor: Cait Sith #29
Experiment: Kitsune to one big balloon
Notes: My half of a trade with
tails230. His three tailed fox character learns the hard way why you don't run up and pull a magical cats tail. :P
My first inflation story, so I'm a bit embarrassed. But damn was it a fun short to write. >^.^;<
Supervisor: Cait Sith #29
Experiment: Kitsune to one big balloon
Notes: My half of a trade with
tails230. His three tailed fox character learns the hard way why you don't run up and pull a magical cats tail. :PMy first inflation story, so I'm a bit embarrassed. But damn was it a fun short to write. >^.^;<
Category Story / Inflation
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 115px
File Size 17.8 kB
I have to admit that when I first heard you mention you "were a writer", I didn't have very high expectations. I've known far too many people who claim to be able to write, but simply come off as pompous jerks, but I must admit you're not bad at this, not bad at all! As Bungle mentioned, you have a very good way of describing things without slowing the pace of the story, but still providing enough information for the reader to visualize it.
Well, damn, that's exactly what he said... so... yeah... good job...?
Anywho, I'd be happy to see more fun stories like the ones you have here :D
Well, damn, that's exactly what he said... so... yeah... good job...?
Anywho, I'd be happy to see more fun stories like the ones you have here :D
I don't blame ya. I've been reading internet stories since I discovered TSA-talk almost ten years ago. So many people make the mistake of listing off multiple actions and no reactions. I feel things like TFs and fights need reactions otherwise they just read off like some sort of 'this happened, then this...' check list. It's very boring if characters are just standing still the whole time their metamorphosing. And even insulting when, after a good two pages of description, an author states it all happened in the span of seconds. 'Give them a show' has become my motto. XD
...sorry got off on a rambling there. >^.^;< I'm glad people enjoy my work either way, and any comments are so muchly appreciated!
...sorry got off on a rambling there. >^.^;< I'm glad people enjoy my work either way, and any comments are so muchly appreciated!
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