Cute little story. I have seen it done before, but its usually not very good.

Well I hope you think my attempt at it was good

If I thought it was bad, I wouldn't have said anything :)
I don't really find stories like this interesting, so if I didn't like it it would have been rude to say anything, no right to judge if against it from the start.

Very cool and cute story! I think you captured the perspective and feeling quite well, certainly one of the best I've read and I read a LOT of these kinds of things. I absolutely love this sort of stuff, the whole thing reminds me of my character in a way even. :3

Also just wanna say, I absolutely adore Jellybean, I think he's gotta be one of the absolute most adorable things I've ever seen! :D ... Of course I might be just a little biased. x3

Excellent work!

I'm really glad you like it!
Considering I wrote it in just under twenty four hours I am amazed it turned out so well!
People are commenting on how well it is written all over the place so YAY! I must be doing something right

JB is indeed an awesome character, I am glad Spider let me use him
I've had plush things stuck on my mind for months now! So it was good to be able to write about him at last and I'm even spinning up my own individual plush character

I do! I love it! [sorry for late response!]
You did a wonderful job! I'd say you've got it down really well for sure. :3

Agreed! I've been shy to ask if I could do something with JB honestly, but I'd love to someday! I think you should totally make a plush character! :D
Maybe I could even help make it if you need someone to bounce ideas with? :3

Hey Trask

I actually have already been working on a plush character for about two months now
They're even out to be drawn/design by Rachexz aka Craty Marten

If you'd like to see what I've come up with in text I'd be happy to share the google doc with you
It's not too late to take some outside input

Oooo! that sounds pretty cool! I'd definitely love to see what you've created so far, I bet It'll look great! :D