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An unsuspecting Mareep gets a rather pleasant surprise after her owner leaves for the day.
Word count: 1477
Fluffy's day started as normally as any other. The electric sheep - a Mareep, to be exact - woke up before her owner, waking him up by jumping up and down on his bed and incessantly nuzzling him until he threw off the duvet and strolled into the bathroom. Her owner gave her breakfast before eating his own, and it took only a few minutes for him to get dressed and leave the house, locking the door behind him.
At this point, Fluffy typically either walked around her owner's house in an attempt to find something with which to amuse herself, or laid down on her owner's bed to sleep. The latter was by far the most common occurrence, and it was what Fluffy proceeded to do. Flopping down onto the soft sheets, Fluffy closed her eyes, waiting for sleep to come.
Except it never did. She felt restless, her entire body tingling. Her eyes shot open, and she let out a short, surprised cry, as she jumped upwards a level, from 15 to 16! Blinking and looking her slightly more powerful body over, Fluffy fidgeted awkwardly atop her owner's bed. What had caused her level to increase? And how?
As Fluffy watched, her entire body seemed to grow stronger by a minute amount, muscles tightening and thickening under skin, hidden by her luxurious wool coat. The Mareep gulped. Her cream-coloured wool seemed to crackle with electricity for a brief second, before she levelled up once, twice, three times, to level 19! Her hitpoints increased, as did her power and her speed. She felt better able to resist elements that would have knocked her out cold in a single hit.
Flopping off the bed and onto the floor, Fluffy entered the living room, hoping against hope that she could figure out why her power was increasing - though it looked like her chances of doing so were slim, as with a nervous squeak, she leapt up to level 25! Wool coat quietly crackling with electricity, speed and toughness increasing far past their previous limits, the Mareep recoiling instinctively.
Level 28. 30. 34. Fluffy's body quivered as energy flooded into her from an unknown source, filling her up and empowering her more with every passing second. With a surprised though joyful cry, Fluffy grew to level forty, then fifty! Her entire body vibrated, tail whipping back and forth, shuddering as her power increased even further.
It only took a few seconds for Fluffy to reach level 100. Eyes wide, she stared at her body, conscious of the exact amount of power she possessed, the exact amount of punishment she could take before fainting. Conscious of the fact that she was somehow now immune to attacks that would have once been crippling to her.
She could feel the energy coursing into her, straining against the maximum level she could reach. It built up and up behind the metaphorical damn, churning and roiling and bubbling angrily. The level cap strained as the electric sheep grit her teeth, screwing her eyes shut as the power overwhelmed her.
And, just like that, Fluffy reached level 101. Her body glowed, morphing and changing shape, as she involuntarily and instantly evolved into a blue-skinned Flaaffy with cream-coloured wool, retaining her old colour scheme. Tottering about on and trying to get used to her new pair of legs, the Pokemon's level increased wildly, growing ever more powerful. She had achieved what should have been impossible, blown past the ultimate cap on all abilities, broken down the metaphorical down. Her body was free to glut on all of the power it could possibly contain, and glut it did.
Level 101 suddenly seemed laughable, when compared to 130. So did levels 150, 170, and 200. As did levels 300 to 500 soon after. Fluffy's level just kept increasing, as did her stats, enough power contained within the sheep to effortlessly beat even the strongest of Legendaries. Other Pokemon suddenly seemed pitiful, being limited to merely 4 moves - how could they best Fluffy when she was limited to ten, to twenty, to thirty; how could they best her when she was immune to every Type and was able to use any move she wanted to?
The sheer level of godlike power concentrated within Fluffy began to manifest; her eyes glowed with ethereal power, and whenever she opened her mouth to breathe, light emanated from her throat. Her owner quicker an eyebrow as his car came to a sudden stop, as did the ones behind it, and with a pop, he appeared in front of her. Fluffy's body began to change again, stretching taller, bigger, thicker and wider, gaining human proportions as her hips pushed out on either side, butt bulging behind her as a pair of breasts swelled from 'nothing' to 'impressive'. Looking her owner in the eyes for a brief moment before she surged past his height, Fluffy calmed him with her powers, erasing any trace of fear within his mind.
Level 1000 came and was surpassed, as was level 2000, 5000, and 10,000 after it. Thousands of gigawatts of electricity harmlessly coursing through her patchy wool coat as her head thumped into the ceiling, Fluffy picked up her owner, before s thought entered her head. He had no hope of making her obey him unless she wanted to do so, even with all his badges. And with her level of power, who was to say that she didn't own him?
Snuggling her new pet dearly, Fluffy burst out of the shell of the house, flinging debris out in all directions. Her powers ensured that it caused no harm. Height escalating along with her power, the Flaaffy's relentless growth caused her little hooves to smash into dozens of houses - but no damage was caused whatsoever; she didn't even need to concentrate on making sure that she did no damage, she had grown so powerful that her subconscious alone was capable of handling such a task.
Rushing up to meet the stormy grey clouds, lightning bolts reached out to kiss her divine body, the sheep goddess unable to do anything but drain them dry and add their energy to her own power. As Legendary Pokemon throughout the universe knelt in submission to her, Fluffy's head pierced the atmosphere, flowing out into space - before with one massive spurt of size and strength, the Earth and the Moon vanished into her wool.
By now, Fluffy was beyond such a concept as a level. Were she to somehow be captured without wrecking the pokeball with her size alone, her level would be displayed as a sideways 8, the symbol for infinity. Conscious of her own level of power, Fluffy knew this, finding it to be somewhat amusing.
A sudden realization same, and Fluffy knew that she was fictional. A fictional construct that was out of control, growing and growing more and more powerful every second. She also knew that, at the rate her powers were growing, it wouldn't be long before whether she was real or not would matter - because at that point, she would be able to decide whether or not she was real.
And as her body strained the edges of the universe, Fluffy noticed you, a small, weak human reading about her through words on a screen. She thought this was rather cute, that you'd devote your time to learning about a being as powerful as her. In fact, I think it's positively adorable, I mean, look at you! So tiny and defenceless, don't you worry, you'll be safe and warm in my wool when I get big enough to reach your universe. It won't be long now until you can spend forever with me - don't worry, I'm a nice owner (and goddess!)! You won't need to worship me or anything, and I'll provide everything you could ever want or need.
In fact, I think I just felt your universe become engulfed by my wool! Hello, anybody in there? Oh no, it looks like that isn't your universe! Maybe this one? Or this one? No, I'm not seeing you in any of them, and there are more universes in my wool right now than I can count! This might take a while, but you'll know when I find you - just look upwards! I'll try not to be too impressive!
This one? Maybe this one? How about this one? Oh, this is going to take longer than I thought, and I'm using my powers to help me find you! I'm not quite sure what to say beyond thank you, mr writer, for creating me - maybe you can help me look for you? Am I hot or cold? Cold. Hot? This really is going to take a while! I guess it's bye, for now, then - bye bye! Just be on the lookout for my wool so you'll know if I've found you!
Word count: 1477
Fluffy's day started as normally as any other. The electric sheep - a Mareep, to be exact - woke up before her owner, waking him up by jumping up and down on his bed and incessantly nuzzling him until he threw off the duvet and strolled into the bathroom. Her owner gave her breakfast before eating his own, and it took only a few minutes for him to get dressed and leave the house, locking the door behind him.
At this point, Fluffy typically either walked around her owner's house in an attempt to find something with which to amuse herself, or laid down on her owner's bed to sleep. The latter was by far the most common occurrence, and it was what Fluffy proceeded to do. Flopping down onto the soft sheets, Fluffy closed her eyes, waiting for sleep to come.
Except it never did. She felt restless, her entire body tingling. Her eyes shot open, and she let out a short, surprised cry, as she jumped upwards a level, from 15 to 16! Blinking and looking her slightly more powerful body over, Fluffy fidgeted awkwardly atop her owner's bed. What had caused her level to increase? And how?
As Fluffy watched, her entire body seemed to grow stronger by a minute amount, muscles tightening and thickening under skin, hidden by her luxurious wool coat. The Mareep gulped. Her cream-coloured wool seemed to crackle with electricity for a brief second, before she levelled up once, twice, three times, to level 19! Her hitpoints increased, as did her power and her speed. She felt better able to resist elements that would have knocked her out cold in a single hit.
Flopping off the bed and onto the floor, Fluffy entered the living room, hoping against hope that she could figure out why her power was increasing - though it looked like her chances of doing so were slim, as with a nervous squeak, she leapt up to level 25! Wool coat quietly crackling with electricity, speed and toughness increasing far past their previous limits, the Mareep recoiling instinctively.
Level 28. 30. 34. Fluffy's body quivered as energy flooded into her from an unknown source, filling her up and empowering her more with every passing second. With a surprised though joyful cry, Fluffy grew to level forty, then fifty! Her entire body vibrated, tail whipping back and forth, shuddering as her power increased even further.
It only took a few seconds for Fluffy to reach level 100. Eyes wide, she stared at her body, conscious of the exact amount of power she possessed, the exact amount of punishment she could take before fainting. Conscious of the fact that she was somehow now immune to attacks that would have once been crippling to her.
She could feel the energy coursing into her, straining against the maximum level she could reach. It built up and up behind the metaphorical damn, churning and roiling and bubbling angrily. The level cap strained as the electric sheep grit her teeth, screwing her eyes shut as the power overwhelmed her.
And, just like that, Fluffy reached level 101. Her body glowed, morphing and changing shape, as she involuntarily and instantly evolved into a blue-skinned Flaaffy with cream-coloured wool, retaining her old colour scheme. Tottering about on and trying to get used to her new pair of legs, the Pokemon's level increased wildly, growing ever more powerful. She had achieved what should have been impossible, blown past the ultimate cap on all abilities, broken down the metaphorical down. Her body was free to glut on all of the power it could possibly contain, and glut it did.
Level 101 suddenly seemed laughable, when compared to 130. So did levels 150, 170, and 200. As did levels 300 to 500 soon after. Fluffy's level just kept increasing, as did her stats, enough power contained within the sheep to effortlessly beat even the strongest of Legendaries. Other Pokemon suddenly seemed pitiful, being limited to merely 4 moves - how could they best Fluffy when she was limited to ten, to twenty, to thirty; how could they best her when she was immune to every Type and was able to use any move she wanted to?
The sheer level of godlike power concentrated within Fluffy began to manifest; her eyes glowed with ethereal power, and whenever she opened her mouth to breathe, light emanated from her throat. Her owner quicker an eyebrow as his car came to a sudden stop, as did the ones behind it, and with a pop, he appeared in front of her. Fluffy's body began to change again, stretching taller, bigger, thicker and wider, gaining human proportions as her hips pushed out on either side, butt bulging behind her as a pair of breasts swelled from 'nothing' to 'impressive'. Looking her owner in the eyes for a brief moment before she surged past his height, Fluffy calmed him with her powers, erasing any trace of fear within his mind.
Level 1000 came and was surpassed, as was level 2000, 5000, and 10,000 after it. Thousands of gigawatts of electricity harmlessly coursing through her patchy wool coat as her head thumped into the ceiling, Fluffy picked up her owner, before s thought entered her head. He had no hope of making her obey him unless she wanted to do so, even with all his badges. And with her level of power, who was to say that she didn't own him?
Snuggling her new pet dearly, Fluffy burst out of the shell of the house, flinging debris out in all directions. Her powers ensured that it caused no harm. Height escalating along with her power, the Flaaffy's relentless growth caused her little hooves to smash into dozens of houses - but no damage was caused whatsoever; she didn't even need to concentrate on making sure that she did no damage, she had grown so powerful that her subconscious alone was capable of handling such a task.
Rushing up to meet the stormy grey clouds, lightning bolts reached out to kiss her divine body, the sheep goddess unable to do anything but drain them dry and add their energy to her own power. As Legendary Pokemon throughout the universe knelt in submission to her, Fluffy's head pierced the atmosphere, flowing out into space - before with one massive spurt of size and strength, the Earth and the Moon vanished into her wool.
By now, Fluffy was beyond such a concept as a level. Were she to somehow be captured without wrecking the pokeball with her size alone, her level would be displayed as a sideways 8, the symbol for infinity. Conscious of her own level of power, Fluffy knew this, finding it to be somewhat amusing.
A sudden realization same, and Fluffy knew that she was fictional. A fictional construct that was out of control, growing and growing more and more powerful every second. She also knew that, at the rate her powers were growing, it wouldn't be long before whether she was real or not would matter - because at that point, she would be able to decide whether or not she was real.
And as her body strained the edges of the universe, Fluffy noticed you, a small, weak human reading about her through words on a screen. She thought this was rather cute, that you'd devote your time to learning about a being as powerful as her. In fact, I think it's positively adorable, I mean, look at you! So tiny and defenceless, don't you worry, you'll be safe and warm in my wool when I get big enough to reach your universe. It won't be long now until you can spend forever with me - don't worry, I'm a nice owner (and goddess!)! You won't need to worship me or anything, and I'll provide everything you could ever want or need.
In fact, I think I just felt your universe become engulfed by my wool! Hello, anybody in there? Oh no, it looks like that isn't your universe! Maybe this one? Or this one? No, I'm not seeing you in any of them, and there are more universes in my wool right now than I can count! This might take a while, but you'll know when I find you - just look upwards! I'll try not to be too impressive!
This one? Maybe this one? How about this one? Oh, this is going to take longer than I thought, and I'm using my powers to help me find you! I'm not quite sure what to say beyond thank you, mr writer, for creating me - maybe you can help me look for you? Am I hot or cold? Cold. Hot? This really is going to take a while! I guess it's bye, for now, then - bye bye! Just be on the lookout for my wool so you'll know if I've found you!
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Hey there! So, I know it's been a while since my last review, I'm sorry about that. Life, and losing my drafts more times than I'd care for kind of got in the way. It took me far, far more time than I would have liked, however, I'm back and finally ready to get reviewing! So, let's not waste any time and jump right in with 'Marrepotheosis', the tale of Fluffy, a perfectly ordinary Mareep who is about to become anything but ordinary!
We begin with a perfectly ordinary day for Fluffy and her owner. They both have breakfast and as Fluffy's owner leaves for work, she goes through to her owner's bedroom to take a nap. Just as usual. As a quick aside, I like how you explain what their usual days are like without getting bogged down in the details. I'm not sure how to describe it other than showing, not telling, which I'm not entirely sure is completely accurate, but regardless, very good job. From your descriptions, I would imagine it must be quite pleasant for her owner to cuddle up to her on a cold night, as it most likely is for her as well, given how she happily prepares to drift off to sleep. There is absolutely nothing out of the ordinary here, no sir, nothing out of the ordinary here.
However, Fluffy finds herself unable to fall asleep. Now, that, that is out of the ordinary, and things only grow more so as out of nowhere, Fluffy suddenly shoots up a level! It should be impossible, she hasn't engaged any enemies, she hasn't gained any experience, so how could this be happening? Before she can come to terms with what just happened to her however, she suddenly rockets up another three levels, just like that! As her wool begins to crackle with power, she grows stronger, faster, more resilient, more powerful. Better.
This shouldn't be happening, it's simply impossible, yet it's undeniably happening, Fluffy racing up in level, from 19 to 25 as what can only be described as pure energy enters her body from some unknown source! Fluffy makes her way into the living room, desperately attempting to discover the source of this power, but even as unlikely as it is, her efforts are halted by the sudden rush of levelling up! From 25 to 28, then 30, then 34, and then 40 and 50! It's a wonderfully written section, the sense of a complete lack of control as the levelling only speeds up, combined with the lack of explanation for what could possible be the cause of this impossible scenario only makes it all the more thrilling!
Yet, it's still not stopping, as within a few seconds, level 50 becomes laughable as she smashes into level 100! With that, it's as if a switch is flipped, as Fluffy now knows. She knows exactly how much physical damage she can take before collapsing, and interestingly, that many sources of damage are now harmless to her.
However, despite having reached maximum level, it's still going! Fluffy's body is pumped full of this mysterious energy as he body strains and she screws her eyes shut and grits her teeth as the power overwhelms her!
Then, it happens. Fluffy evolves, going from a Mareep to a Flaffy. She has achieved the impossible. However, she's only just gotten started, as the energy is still present and still flooding into her, and now that she has broken down the barrier, she is free to take as much energy as her body can, and her body eagerly obliges!
Level 50 was once considered laughable, but as her levelling quickly becomes exponential, level 100 now seems laughable, as does level 130, and level 150, then 170, then 200 all the way to 500, all sense of restraint evaporated! To suggest Fluffy is powerful is more of an insult at this stage, she's that powerful! She knows every move possible, she is immune to everything, everything! She truly is unbeatable at this stage, yet she's still not done! The sense of rampant, unstoppable power growth is palpable, and you've done a truly exquisite job of writing that!
Fluffy continues to grow stronger by the second, her power reaching levels that can now only be called divine! Her body is now literally glowing with sheer power, light emanating from her throat and eyes! Ethereal power, that's such an incredible way of putting it, this entire section is just wonderfully written!
Some distance away, Fluffy's owner's car stops. Just like that, with no apparent explanation, it just stops, much to her owner's justified confusion. In an instant, he suddenly finds himself standing before Fluffy, teleported instantly, simply because she willed it to be so. Her power is literally deific at this stage, she could truly be called a goddess!
Thus, she bestows upon herself a body befitting of a goddess! Her entire frame grows! Taller, broader, thicker, bigger, bigger! As she swells outwards into more human proportions, her rump and chest pushing out impressively, she reaches her owner's height and surges past! Fortunately for her owner, he doesn't have to be afraid thanks to her powers, which is very convenient since shock and fear is quite the appropriate response to something as immense as this!
Although, having just said that, perhaps terror would be the more apt emotion in that circumstance! Fluffy, still growing exponentially more powerful by the second, shoots up past level after level, reaching level 1000! However, that's nowhere near enough, as she promptly reaches level 2000, 5000, 10,000 and beyond!
As she continues to grow in power, her body expands in kind, her head thumping into the ceiling! It's at this point that she makes an observation, one that I find incredibly thrilling! Even with all his badges, all his accolades, at the end of the day, her trainer is an ordinary mortal. He couldn't force her to do anything she didn't want to do, and as she notes herself, she's so powerful now, it could be said that she owns him. The idea of such a dramatic role reversal, someone's pet, or in this case, Pokemon, becoming so impossibly powerful that they own their former master? It's quite the idea, and one that I absolutely love! Especially when it's this well written!
Fluffy's growth continues explosively, literally, as she bursts out of the house, growing so fast that she smothers several other homes beneath her immense form, yet there is no damage, no destruction, no threat to the people around her. She is simply so powerful that she doesn't even need to think about that, if she doesn't want to cause any damage, then she won't. It's as simple as that for her, a true testament to her impossible, deific power.
That power only continues to escalate, as does her height, rushing up past storm clouds, which add their energy to hers, as the legendary Pokemon all bow, conceding their inferiority to her, before she promptly surges in size and engulfs the moon and Earth into her wool!
It's at this stage that Fluffy is simply far beyond any concept of measurement, and that brings us to a particular line that is just... truly fantastic! Fluffy knows that she's fictional, but now she's so powerful, she can simply decide whether she's real or not. That... that line, I like metafiction, especially when it's metamacro, characters so big and powerful that they overpower the fourth wall, but that line in particular... it's as thrilling as it is terrifying, the concept that a fictional character could just decide that they're real and make it so, that level of power evokes a flash of primal fear in me, and I utterly crave it. That sort of power; pure, raw, unrestrained, unrestrainable power is exactly the sort of power I love, and you pulled it off masterfully, not just here, but in lots of your works! But, that's for later, for now, let's keep going!
On the topic of meta, the way you write Fluffy noticing the reader is expertly written, from the way it shifts from third person to first person, to the way that she begins engulfing countless universes into her wool, it's just fantastic in every way! The suggestion that she'll eventually engulf our reality, well that's just the icing on the cake! What a wonderful thing to leave off on, ha ha!
Now, I'll finish up the review here, hopefully I was able to express how impressive this was, and I hope you enjoyed this very long review that took way, way too long to write. That said though, it was absolutely worth it, and I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! I'll try and get my next review - on 'Beast' - as soon as I can!
Thank you very much for reading, and if you have any comments or questions or anything, just let me know! Until next time, thank you for reading, and I hope you have a great day!
We begin with a perfectly ordinary day for Fluffy and her owner. They both have breakfast and as Fluffy's owner leaves for work, she goes through to her owner's bedroom to take a nap. Just as usual. As a quick aside, I like how you explain what their usual days are like without getting bogged down in the details. I'm not sure how to describe it other than showing, not telling, which I'm not entirely sure is completely accurate, but regardless, very good job. From your descriptions, I would imagine it must be quite pleasant for her owner to cuddle up to her on a cold night, as it most likely is for her as well, given how she happily prepares to drift off to sleep. There is absolutely nothing out of the ordinary here, no sir, nothing out of the ordinary here.
However, Fluffy finds herself unable to fall asleep. Now, that, that is out of the ordinary, and things only grow more so as out of nowhere, Fluffy suddenly shoots up a level! It should be impossible, she hasn't engaged any enemies, she hasn't gained any experience, so how could this be happening? Before she can come to terms with what just happened to her however, she suddenly rockets up another three levels, just like that! As her wool begins to crackle with power, she grows stronger, faster, more resilient, more powerful. Better.
This shouldn't be happening, it's simply impossible, yet it's undeniably happening, Fluffy racing up in level, from 19 to 25 as what can only be described as pure energy enters her body from some unknown source! Fluffy makes her way into the living room, desperately attempting to discover the source of this power, but even as unlikely as it is, her efforts are halted by the sudden rush of levelling up! From 25 to 28, then 30, then 34, and then 40 and 50! It's a wonderfully written section, the sense of a complete lack of control as the levelling only speeds up, combined with the lack of explanation for what could possible be the cause of this impossible scenario only makes it all the more thrilling!
Yet, it's still not stopping, as within a few seconds, level 50 becomes laughable as she smashes into level 100! With that, it's as if a switch is flipped, as Fluffy now knows. She knows exactly how much physical damage she can take before collapsing, and interestingly, that many sources of damage are now harmless to her.
However, despite having reached maximum level, it's still going! Fluffy's body is pumped full of this mysterious energy as he body strains and she screws her eyes shut and grits her teeth as the power overwhelms her!
Then, it happens. Fluffy evolves, going from a Mareep to a Flaffy. She has achieved the impossible. However, she's only just gotten started, as the energy is still present and still flooding into her, and now that she has broken down the barrier, she is free to take as much energy as her body can, and her body eagerly obliges!
Level 50 was once considered laughable, but as her levelling quickly becomes exponential, level 100 now seems laughable, as does level 130, and level 150, then 170, then 200 all the way to 500, all sense of restraint evaporated! To suggest Fluffy is powerful is more of an insult at this stage, she's that powerful! She knows every move possible, she is immune to everything, everything! She truly is unbeatable at this stage, yet she's still not done! The sense of rampant, unstoppable power growth is palpable, and you've done a truly exquisite job of writing that!
Fluffy continues to grow stronger by the second, her power reaching levels that can now only be called divine! Her body is now literally glowing with sheer power, light emanating from her throat and eyes! Ethereal power, that's such an incredible way of putting it, this entire section is just wonderfully written!
Some distance away, Fluffy's owner's car stops. Just like that, with no apparent explanation, it just stops, much to her owner's justified confusion. In an instant, he suddenly finds himself standing before Fluffy, teleported instantly, simply because she willed it to be so. Her power is literally deific at this stage, she could truly be called a goddess!
Thus, she bestows upon herself a body befitting of a goddess! Her entire frame grows! Taller, broader, thicker, bigger, bigger! As she swells outwards into more human proportions, her rump and chest pushing out impressively, she reaches her owner's height and surges past! Fortunately for her owner, he doesn't have to be afraid thanks to her powers, which is very convenient since shock and fear is quite the appropriate response to something as immense as this!
Although, having just said that, perhaps terror would be the more apt emotion in that circumstance! Fluffy, still growing exponentially more powerful by the second, shoots up past level after level, reaching level 1000! However, that's nowhere near enough, as she promptly reaches level 2000, 5000, 10,000 and beyond!
As she continues to grow in power, her body expands in kind, her head thumping into the ceiling! It's at this point that she makes an observation, one that I find incredibly thrilling! Even with all his badges, all his accolades, at the end of the day, her trainer is an ordinary mortal. He couldn't force her to do anything she didn't want to do, and as she notes herself, she's so powerful now, it could be said that she owns him. The idea of such a dramatic role reversal, someone's pet, or in this case, Pokemon, becoming so impossibly powerful that they own their former master? It's quite the idea, and one that I absolutely love! Especially when it's this well written!
Fluffy's growth continues explosively, literally, as she bursts out of the house, growing so fast that she smothers several other homes beneath her immense form, yet there is no damage, no destruction, no threat to the people around her. She is simply so powerful that she doesn't even need to think about that, if she doesn't want to cause any damage, then she won't. It's as simple as that for her, a true testament to her impossible, deific power.
That power only continues to escalate, as does her height, rushing up past storm clouds, which add their energy to hers, as the legendary Pokemon all bow, conceding their inferiority to her, before she promptly surges in size and engulfs the moon and Earth into her wool!
It's at this stage that Fluffy is simply far beyond any concept of measurement, and that brings us to a particular line that is just... truly fantastic! Fluffy knows that she's fictional, but now she's so powerful, she can simply decide whether she's real or not. That... that line, I like metafiction, especially when it's metamacro, characters so big and powerful that they overpower the fourth wall, but that line in particular... it's as thrilling as it is terrifying, the concept that a fictional character could just decide that they're real and make it so, that level of power evokes a flash of primal fear in me, and I utterly crave it. That sort of power; pure, raw, unrestrained, unrestrainable power is exactly the sort of power I love, and you pulled it off masterfully, not just here, but in lots of your works! But, that's for later, for now, let's keep going!
On the topic of meta, the way you write Fluffy noticing the reader is expertly written, from the way it shifts from third person to first person, to the way that she begins engulfing countless universes into her wool, it's just fantastic in every way! The suggestion that she'll eventually engulf our reality, well that's just the icing on the cake! What a wonderful thing to leave off on, ha ha!
Now, I'll finish up the review here, hopefully I was able to express how impressive this was, and I hope you enjoyed this very long review that took way, way too long to write. That said though, it was absolutely worth it, and I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! I'll try and get my next review - on 'Beast' - as soon as I can!
Thank you very much for reading, and if you have any comments or questions or anything, just let me know! Until next time, thank you for reading, and I hope you have a great day!
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