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Blue Chambers - Chapter 1 (PAW DAY Story!)
And happy Paw Day everyone! Or...happy belated Paw day...unfortunately. XD I've been working on art and stories and commissions and animations, kinda juggling a lot of stuff at the moment, but I reeeally wanted to do something special for Paw Day yesterday.
I'd originally just wanted a regular paw-picture...but then I decided that that wouldn't do the day justice, espeically considering everything else I could do! So, I came up with the idea for two possible paw-centric TF stories, and a few ideas for animations as well. I'll be posting up the animations later on as I finish then, as well as the other story once I finish that one as well.
In any case, regarding the story, I've been drawing sergal characters a LOT in the past...but I've never had one of my own. Sooo, I made one! If this and the other story I'm working on get enough approval from my watchers, I might just make sequels for them later as well. ^_^
Enjoy the Paw worship and transformation! I might also try sketching a scene from this story later on too. XD
I'd originally just wanted a regular paw-picture...but then I decided that that wouldn't do the day justice, espeically considering everything else I could do! So, I came up with the idea for two possible paw-centric TF stories, and a few ideas for animations as well. I'll be posting up the animations later on as I finish then, as well as the other story once I finish that one as well.
In any case, regarding the story, I've been drawing sergal characters a LOT in the past...but I've never had one of my own. Sooo, I made one! If this and the other story I'm working on get enough approval from my watchers, I might just make sequels for them later as well. ^_^
Enjoy the Paw worship and transformation! I might also try sketching a scene from this story later on too. XD
Category Story / Paw
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File Size 18.2 kB
Yep, I was actually a TF writer online for a good while before I started drawing regularly, so I've kinda been working to get back into the habit of doing both more often now. And that sounds good! I'm not much of a Skyper at the moment, but you're more than welcome to drop me a note and we can chat a bit there if you want. ^_^
Thank you very much. I appreciate that. Should you ever find time in your schedule, would you consider looking at one of the short pieces I wrote as well? It's a paw story and about 5 pages in link but I'd like your feedback if you can because I'm doing story trades and commissions when I'm done with college
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/15326827/
I'm a writer first and foremost but I'm getting into 3D art more to bring my stories to life
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/15326827/
I'm a writer first and foremost but I'm getting into 3D art more to bring my stories to life
I read it and enjoyed it.
I like how the setting started out for Anton and the library was a nice quiet space since very few were privileged enough to enter. You gave a nice description of your characters and I could sense each on have a voice of their own, meaning you did a nice job capturing their attitudes and personalities. I like how this didnt jump into pawplays but slowly built up to it, I could visualize everything happening clearly.
The transformation was well written and nicely detailed. It was nice seeing you sort of change the point of view for Anton as he felt his body changing and the new sensation he felt before and after feeling Fritz paws.
I did see a few grammar mistakes but no more than about 3-5 but they were completely minor. I do wonder how long the spell lasts though. From the looks of Fritz's job it'll be a while before he gets done with anything as he cleans the book shelves.
This was a nice story overall though and very fluid.
I like how the setting started out for Anton and the library was a nice quiet space since very few were privileged enough to enter. You gave a nice description of your characters and I could sense each on have a voice of their own, meaning you did a nice job capturing their attitudes and personalities. I like how this didnt jump into pawplays but slowly built up to it, I could visualize everything happening clearly.
The transformation was well written and nicely detailed. It was nice seeing you sort of change the point of view for Anton as he felt his body changing and the new sensation he felt before and after feeling Fritz paws.
I did see a few grammar mistakes but no more than about 3-5 but they were completely minor. I do wonder how long the spell lasts though. From the looks of Fritz's job it'll be a while before he gets done with anything as he cleans the book shelves.
This was a nice story overall though and very fluid.
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