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Alrighty everyone, this is a COMPLETELY new piece I've come up with! o.o
The last poem I submitted was one of my old works. I haven't written anything in a good while actually, but HERE it is! Something fresh! My poetry class has really given me some great ideas!
Also, I must thank
Moonlit_Wolf714 because he inspired me to deviate from my usual style and try something new. *hugs him* X3
*Now then, I have some VERY strict notes that you readers should keep in mind:
1.) THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY (3) POEMS
2.) THE LEFT HALF IS A POEM (focus on vibrant alliteration)
3.) THE RIGHT HALF IS A POEM (focus on concrete rhymes)
4.) THE TWO COMBINED (read lines straight across) ARE THE TRUE POEM
5.) YOU MAY READ THEM IN ANY ORDER YOU WISH! =3
6.) THE OVERALL RHYTHM/FLOW FOR EACH OF THE (3) POEMS IS RATHER QUICK!
The (3 in 1) was actually unintentional, but I soon noticed it and realized that it was MEANT to be! However, what WAS intentional you'll find once you read the poems themselves. It's a wonderful little surprise and the very BASIS of the poems! (Also, ∪ is the mathematical symbol for "union.") =O
I hope you guys enjoy this one. I'm still STOKED at how well it came out. Feel free to leave comments and ASK QUESTIONS TOO! =3
The last poem I submitted was one of my old works. I haven't written anything in a good while actually, but HERE it is! Something fresh! My poetry class has really given me some great ideas!
Also, I must thank
Moonlit_Wolf714 because he inspired me to deviate from my usual style and try something new. *hugs him* X3*Now then, I have some VERY strict notes that you readers should keep in mind:
1.) THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY (3) POEMS
2.) THE LEFT HALF IS A POEM (focus on vibrant alliteration)
3.) THE RIGHT HALF IS A POEM (focus on concrete rhymes)
4.) THE TWO COMBINED (read lines straight across) ARE THE TRUE POEM
5.) YOU MAY READ THEM IN ANY ORDER YOU WISH! =3
6.) THE OVERALL RHYTHM/FLOW FOR EACH OF THE (3) POEMS IS RATHER QUICK!
The (3 in 1) was actually unintentional, but I soon noticed it and realized that it was MEANT to be! However, what WAS intentional you'll find once you read the poems themselves. It's a wonderful little surprise and the very BASIS of the poems! (Also, ∪ is the mathematical symbol for "union.") =O
I hope you guys enjoy this one. I'm still STOKED at how well it came out. Feel free to leave comments and ASK QUESTIONS TOO! =3
Category Poetry / Scenery
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Size 120 x 86px
File Size 25 kB
Hehe, really? ^^;
Wow, I didn't think to receive anymore comments on this piece of work. Actually, this was the very first piece of poetry I'd ever written with contentment. =3
I thought it defined me; of course, this was long before I learned of meter. So, you could imagine that I'm far less fond of this poem as I used to be. I just think this poem is all over the place--not organized or "perfect." 8<
Still, I appreciate the comment. =D
Wow, I didn't think to receive anymore comments on this piece of work. Actually, this was the very first piece of poetry I'd ever written with contentment. =3
I thought it defined me; of course, this was long before I learned of meter. So, you could imagine that I'm far less fond of this poem as I used to be. I just think this poem is all over the place--not organized or "perfect." 8<
Still, I appreciate the comment. =D
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