this is a story i'm working on. please don't be to harsh on your comments. i haven't even reviewed it yet. aka, i really meant ROUGH draft. i should be putting up either a redone version some time (eventually (man i'm lazy) or the next chapter. it all depends on what the comments. you guys tell me what you want. i've had the concept for the characters i'm using in the story, but have no idea were the the story it's self is going. exciting, isn't it. anyway, tell me what you all think and we'll see what happens.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 40.4 kB
Really enjoyable your first chapter, I can't believe there is no other comments yet, a great read so far! I will definitely read on. :) I liked how you explained the clothing part neat! I haven't been interested in a story for a long time but that has changed after reading yours, really impressed. :)
i...don't know what to say. i think you and
tsuki579 are the only two who i think have even bother to rad it. most people don't bother with my scraps. it's not done though, and it will most likely stay there tell i'm done with it.
it warms my heart to think i managed to create something you enjoyed that much! i think that is what makes my writing really worth it.
again, thank you for your kind words.
tsuki579 are the only two who i think have even bother to rad it. most people don't bother with my scraps. it's not done though, and it will most likely stay there tell i'm done with it.it warms my heart to think i managed to create something you enjoyed that much! i think that is what makes my writing really worth it.
again, thank you for your kind words.
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