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A faint echo of James Seay's magnificent
"The Puritan"
and
of course
Plato
"The Puritan"
and
of course
Plato
Category Poetry / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 273 B
The LAST 2 stanzas are VERY VERY nice! =P
"The prints I leave behind
Trail me meekly,
Like a forlorn pack."
This is an EXCELLENT animal related simile! =3
"A wind whispering blind
From distant peaks
Covers my bare back."
And this is a WONDERFUL description of the desert wind, AND a GREAT finishing line. ^^
You've got some NICE free verse man! \(^o^)/
"The prints I leave behind
Trail me meekly,
Like a forlorn pack."
This is an EXCELLENT animal related simile! =3
"A wind whispering blind
From distant peaks
Covers my bare back."
And this is a WONDERFUL description of the desert wind, AND a GREAT finishing line. ^^
You've got some NICE free verse man! \(^o^)/
Hmm, good point. The stanzas are what made me loose sight of that! =P
Going with how the stanzas are set up, it'd be --> abc - dec - fgh - ijh
Though, since each stanza is technically ONE sentence, it could be seen as simply --> aabb
It's nice EITHER way you look at it though! ;3
Going with how the stanzas are set up, it'd be --> abc - dec - fgh - ijh
Though, since each stanza is technically ONE sentence, it could be seen as simply --> aabb
It's nice EITHER way you look at it though! ;3
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