Woah! THREE days in a row. (see previous submissions if you want to know what I mean)
Here's a song I wrote when I still thought I might be able to do some hard rock stuff. This recording isn't... that different from the first one. I'm a bit better at mixing and recording but like... the first shot wasn't all that bad :/ weird. I think the weakness in this one is just the songwriting. It just isn't very well written. BUT hey give me YOUR opinion on the comments.
Here's the old version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3587131/
Which one ya like better? Can you tell the difference?
Order the album now!
http://lookleft.us/album/first-four
Here's a song I wrote when I still thought I might be able to do some hard rock stuff. This recording isn't... that different from the first one. I'm a bit better at mixing and recording but like... the first shot wasn't all that bad :/ weird. I think the weakness in this one is just the songwriting. It just isn't very well written. BUT hey give me YOUR opinion on the comments.
Here's the old version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3587131/
Which one ya like better? Can you tell the difference?
Order the album now!
http://lookleft.us/album/first-four
Category Music / All
Species Coyote
Size 120 x 86px
File Size 5.13 MB
Well if a lot of punk rock is any indication it doesn't have to be a Shakespearean sonnet to carry weight.
There is much hair metal that is more tightly written than your typical punk affair and I would pick the
punk rock ten times out of ten for affect versus and excess of haughty, self-important artifice.
That said I think this recording errs on the side of a little too polished for what its trying to do. I don't
hate it but it doesn't get the blood flowing in the same way, ya know?
A question: what do you really consider this song to be about?
There is much hair metal that is more tightly written than your typical punk affair and I would pick the
punk rock ten times out of ten for affect versus and excess of haughty, self-important artifice.
That said I think this recording errs on the side of a little too polished for what its trying to do. I don't
hate it but it doesn't get the blood flowing in the same way, ya know?
A question: what do you really consider this song to be about?
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