nice start, but of course it's hard to tell from the initial splash page. ^^

the second paragraph of the narrator should read, "Myths and fairy tales are written in blood" or "...with bloody ink"; but then again I am no native speaker myself, and there might be a more suitable phrase. :)

layout and panels look good, although I think the light is a bit too wide for the spot it throws onto the ground. like the main panel was cut in half.

I guess you know Scott McCloud's "Understanding Comics"? if not, try to find it; it might give you good ideas for further pages. :)

Thanks you A LOT for the supportive criticism =D
Teah, the effect of the light was supposed to be kind of a degradee or something, I dunno, but I suppose oit didn't result like it should... I'll see to fix it later
Special thanks for the grammar correction, I'll need a lot of that =)
I'll get that reference you suggest and find what I can learn.

at your service, senor. :)

wow you went all out with the details, nice

Thanks you!
BTW, may I ask where you got that Chun-Li avatar? Her expression is so... err, well I like it

Futa chunli dojin, she rapes shotas with her giant cawk