
And the thrilling, bloated (in more ways than one) conclusion to this wacky adventure.
It's done, I'm done, time to move on. I'm quite pleased with myself concerning the actual transformation, but the whole thing felt a little overly elaborate for the pay off.
Oh well, I hope somebody likes it. Enjoy the puffy bat.
Also, I'm with Eckelson, I could eat Udon noodles and desert buns until I popped.
It's done, I'm done, time to move on. I'm quite pleased with myself concerning the actual transformation, but the whole thing felt a little overly elaborate for the pay off.
Oh well, I hope somebody likes it. Enjoy the puffy bat.
Also, I'm with Eckelson, I could eat Udon noodles and desert buns until I popped.
Category Story / Inflation
Species Bat
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 41.8 kB
Oh that was very good..., very tense stuff, but it was still charming and intriguing... it was very fascinating to watch this all unfold. Good use of the lack of vision with the changes in the sewer bit as well. And boy he really lucked out by being able to control what he damages, otherwise that pretty lil ship of his would be dead in the water. A fantastic read, very good work!
I did not see that one coming. ^^;
Fantastic descriptiveness, both the intense escape and the enjoyable aftermath were full of emotion and proper visuals. The tone of this story is hard to nail down, but someone like me can enjoy every bit of it. It was a clever and unique transformation, very enjoyable.
Fantastic descriptiveness, both the intense escape and the enjoyable aftermath were full of emotion and proper visuals. The tone of this story is hard to nail down, but someone like me can enjoy every bit of it. It was a clever and unique transformation, very enjoyable.
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