Amusing. Interesting. There's so much hidden in this piece, the motivators and reasons of the protagonists are complete mysteries, as is the space he is trying to enter. Apparently they are hidden for you too. Still, I enjoyed the tale, even laughed a bit, the monologue has power and some pretty good lines, somehow it seemed real. That is how a person locked out, or in, would react, when trying to get their message through the door. Great little piece, even if so much is left to mystery. Heh, the theme is "the hidden room". Anyway, I liked this. Good work.

Hee.. as usual Panzergulo stole the words from me.. so i can only say that I kinda enjoyed this piece.. tho it feels slightly.. creepy to me.. X3

*gets creeped easily*

Cool idea. Reminds me of when my brother and I were kids, and we used to hold the door shut so the other couldn't get in.