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Could think of no better way to commemorate the date.
Here you have it. The first story I ever finished. Some, uhm.... over three years ago? Yikes.
This is what I showed people whenever they asked "Wait, you write?". Managed to con
footpaws and 
cuixilfer into believing I did, so hey, it works. XD
I never posted it in all these years as I started both the first part and the sequel at the same time... and then lost steam after finishing the sequel, but not the prequel! Well, better late than never. As such, I post it here as-is, with no further edits. Even though it REALLY needs a few. I'm a believer seeing how a person improved from piece to piece is half of a gallery's fun.
Enjoy it. Criticism more than welcome.
Story and characters @
venombahamut
You can see illustrations for this story, done by
kctk, at: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24535366/
Here you have it. The first story I ever finished. Some, uhm.... over three years ago? Yikes.
This is what I showed people whenever they asked "Wait, you write?". Managed to con
footpaws and 
cuixilfer into believing I did, so hey, it works. XDI never posted it in all these years as I started both the first part and the sequel at the same time... and then lost steam after finishing the sequel, but not the prequel! Well, better late than never. As such, I post it here as-is, with no further edits. Even though it REALLY needs a few. I'm a believer seeing how a person improved from piece to piece is half of a gallery's fun.
Enjoy it. Criticism more than welcome.
Story and characters @
venombahamutYou can see illustrations for this story, done by
kctk, at: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24535366/
Category Story / Paw
Species Tiger
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17.7 kB
Listed in Folders
Wait, you write? =P
This is definitely from your brain, good sir =) The teasing words and tickling style is a great signature of yours that Call carries. Why did you not post it three years ago?! Selfish, really. And once Kote recovers, he should still get to tickle Call for 90 min at least =P
This is definitely from your brain, good sir =) The teasing words and tickling style is a great signature of yours that Call carries. Why did you not post it three years ago?! Selfish, really. And once Kote recovers, he should still get to tickle Call for 90 min at least =P
Why I oughta...!
Really? I have signatures already? Cool. = P You'll have to describe that to me in more detail later. I didn't because I felt it needed both parts to be complete. And the first one wasn't complete because I'm na idiotic perfectionist or something. Even though I ended up rushing it in the end, hence the idiotic part. XP So, not selfish, think of it as an investment in the future. ; D
90 minutes! You think he could handle that? = P
Really? I have signatures already? Cool. = P You'll have to describe that to me in more detail later. I didn't because I felt it needed both parts to be complete. And the first one wasn't complete because I'm na idiotic perfectionist or something. Even though I ended up rushing it in the end, hence the idiotic part. XP So, not selfish, think of it as an investment in the future. ; D
90 minutes! You think he could handle that? = P
Everyone has small themes that pervade their work =) The tickler teasing dialogue here is an example for you.
Is Kote devilish enough to invite Call to a bath, trap and tickle him for an hour, then bring him to the bath to snuggle? Kote would not have lied, just not specified the time it would take to actually reach the tub ;)
Is Kote devilish enough to invite Call to a bath, trap and tickle him for an hour, then bring him to the bath to snuggle? Kote would not have lied, just not specified the time it would take to actually reach the tub ;)
Oh gosh there was so much I liked. Musk stuff, fresh out of the sneaker teasing. Hoo Boy. The whole idea of a tickling contest is hot and fun. And i just loved how cute their relationship is. How the cat is so proud and boastful but his human pal knows just how to break him. The deviousness of how he was tricked into getting tickled with a promise of revenge that never came. Using his ego and competitiveness against him. I love when a big tough jock gets brought down by tickles. I just loved all of it. Great tickling actions. Adorable characters/relationship. Great descriptive detail in the writing. It was super all around. A+ work.
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