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Here's the original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Ne_XzO4LJM
I threw this together today. It was still kind of awkward without a proper studio, but whatever.
I always thought this was such a curious song. It's so subtle and beautiful and at the same time so scathingly cynical.
I'd like to try to polish the vocals some more, but we'll see.
Lyrics:
Inevitably, it's starting to bleed,
And couldn't be stopped, that's justice.
Incredible luck, to lift and be struck,
What curious things...
A moment to think, before we will sing,
That beauty's a lie told sweetly.
And don't be afraid,
Don't be afraid,
Don't be afraid...
(My bumpkin boy)
Does this look like that?
How cruel you get.
I've started again
To miss your hands.
What carnage you've left,
And you were dead,
You've mangled your flesh
To see us break.
Our souls are unrest,
What kind of pride is this?
Dry your, dry your eyes,
They'll salt his wounds,
If burning the flesh means finding the one.
I threw this together today. It was still kind of awkward without a proper studio, but whatever.
I always thought this was such a curious song. It's so subtle and beautiful and at the same time so scathingly cynical.
I'd like to try to polish the vocals some more, but we'll see.
Lyrics:
Inevitably, it's starting to bleed,
And couldn't be stopped, that's justice.
Incredible luck, to lift and be struck,
What curious things...
A moment to think, before we will sing,
That beauty's a lie told sweetly.
And don't be afraid,
Don't be afraid,
Don't be afraid...
(My bumpkin boy)
Does this look like that?
How cruel you get.
I've started again
To miss your hands.
What carnage you've left,
And you were dead,
You've mangled your flesh
To see us break.
Our souls are unrest,
What kind of pride is this?
Dry your, dry your eyes,
They'll salt his wounds,
If burning the flesh means finding the one.
Category Music / All
Species Unspecified / Any
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File Size 8.37 MB
Now, I know in the original the voice is pretty quiet, but the deepness of the singers voice can be heard over the generally brighter sounding instrumental track. I feel, in this case and going off how you sing (higher pitched), your voice is overpowered by the instruments. Of course, when the song gets to it's mid point and your're singing louder, it sounds nice since I can actually hear what you're saying!
I would either deepen the instrumental track in the beginning, of raise the volume of your voice!
~Puppy
I would either deepen the instrumental track in the beginning, of raise the volume of your voice!
~Puppy
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