
Advanced Character CREATION
Hero ~ Villain ~ Ally
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There are three essential characters in every story. There may be any number of side characters, but in traditional Adventures, and Romances of every stripe (erotic or not,) the main conflict is usually, if not always, a TRIANGLE of complimentary opposites.
Translation: You could tell the whole story with ONLY these Three Characters; perhaps not with any real detail, but you could still do the entire basic plotline.
THREE Characters?
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I'm sure you're familiar with the names Hero & Villain or Antagonist & Protagonist already. Those are pretty darn standard. However, always there, though seldom named is a Third character, the Ally -- the Companion to the Hero or Villain
The Invisible Character: the Ally
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The Ally’s function is to be the Middle-Man, the nay-sayer that presents an opposing view to both the Hero and the Villain. The Ally is the Obstacle Character who adds complications to the plot, making matters worse for both the Hero and the Villain, generally by getting in the way.
In Romances, this character is the Love Interest. In modern mainstream fiction, and tons of movies, this is the trouble-inducing Best Friend or Interfering Relative, (often a younger sibling). In comic books, they’re the Side-kick. In traditional fiction, they were known as the Victim.
In ALL cases, the Ally’s fate turns the plot at the Climax, usually by needing to be rescued, and more often than not, the Ally is also the story’s narrator, or the Viewpoint Character.
Okay… So, if you already have a Main Character and a Villain, all you need is an Ally, a trouble-maker to stir the pot…err, PLOT.
Here’s the tricky part. When dealing with a story with a large cast, the three characters swap out, they change places at Every Scene Change ~ BUT ~ each scene still only contains, three main characters.
Main Characters: Hellsing
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Protagonist: Alucard
Antagonist: Sir Integra Hellsing
Ally: Seras, Victoria
When these three Hellsing characters occupy a scene TOGETHER, though it’s rare, those are the parts they play. However, when Alucard & Seras Victoria are in a scene together, Alucard plays the Protagonist and Seras the Ally (and narrator of the scene,) with whatever third character being the Antagonist. On the flip-side, when Sir Integra Hellsing and Alucard share a scene, Sir Integra plays the Protagonist and Alucard the Ally. Whatever third character shows up usually plays the Antagonist.
Confusing isn’t it? It gets even more so when the cast is as large as that of Naruto, or Lord of the Rings.
Memorize this: The Larger the Cast, the Longer the Story.
Why is this so important? The more people you involve in your story, the more plot-threads you’ll need to tie up at the end. In other words, every time you switch your triad of characters, you are in effect creating a whole new story that MUST be concluded IN ADDITION to your lead characters’ story.
This means that if you only plan to write a short story, you need to keep the story focused on your main three characters. That doesn’t mean you can’t have other characters, it just means that those extra characters shouldn’t contribute to the story as anything more than window-dressing or props.
Once you decide on your Three Main Characters, how do you make them work together? By figuring out what makes each character tick…
The Quick and Dirty Method:
THREE QUESTIONS
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Have each of your three characters answer these three questions:
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1. Who am I and what do I do?
2. What do I want?
3. What is the worst thing that could happen to me?
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The first question, “Who am I?” should clue you in as to what each characters’ greatest weakness is. The second question, “What do I want?” gives you their motives. As for the third question, by combining the answers to “…the worst thing,” this should give you the big reversal, the story’s darkest moment at the center of the story.
Example:
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1 - I am an heiress and a Knight to my Queen.
2 - I am on a holy crusade to destroy the unholy monsters that prey on humans.
3 - Give me control of a creature more monstrous than any monster out there -- and make me like him as a person.
1 - I’m a Vampire that preys on other vampires.
2 - I want sanity.
3 - Make me so monstrously insane I have to voluntarily choose to be enslaved by one who can control me.
1 - I am a Cop that became a vampire.
2 - I want to save lives.
3 - Have me discover that the vampire that made me is dangerously insane.
This method works especially well when you have three excellent characters but you’re not quite sure what kind of story you want to write for them.
Advanced Character Development
Traits & Flaws
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To thoroughly understand what makes your characters tick, use this character sheet for Each of your three main characters. This method is particularly useful when you intend to write something the size of a novel.
Character Sheet
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• Name:
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• Designation: “I am a…”
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• Positive Trait: “I’m liked because…”
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• Negative Trait: “I’m disliked because…”
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• Ego flaw: “Makes me great yet could destroy me…”
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• Ambition: “I want…”
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• Motive: “I’m doing this because…”
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• Internal Conflict: “I am troubled by…”
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• External Conflict: “I am thwarted by…”
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• Secret: “I don’t know or I am hiding…”
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• Ordeal/Reversal: “Last thing I ever want to happen…?”
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• Epiphany: “I will discover…”
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• Bio:
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You’ll notice that I left out some of the more obvious things found in most character sheets: jobs, skills, physical descriptions, and other technical data. This was done deliberately. By using a character sheet that maps out only the Heart and Mind of your character, you’re free to use the SAME character in other stories under other names.
In Conclusion…
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The fastest way to make characters is by starting with a familiar character, such as a movie character or actor, and warping them to suit your needs. Both of these methods should prove handy to do just that whether you are working with known characters for a fan-fiction or creating new ones for something entirely original.
Enjoy!
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DISCLAIMER: As with all advice, take what you can use and throw out the rest. As a multi-published author, I have been taught some fairly rigid rules on what is publishable and what is not. If my rather straight-laced (and occasionally snotty,) advice does not suit your creative style, by all means, IGNORE IT.
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hmmm...
So, all this time I've been writing 13-page character profiles, asking questions like "Who are you?" and "What do you want?" and extensively Roleplaying them in situations Frodo himself wouldn't be caught dead in...
...I've been doing the right thing ^^
Yay me! ^_^
So, all this time I've been writing 13-page character profiles, asking questions like "Who are you?" and "What do you want?" and extensively Roleplaying them in situations Frodo himself wouldn't be caught dead in...
...I've been doing the right thing ^^
Yay me! ^_^
OH!
-- Well, that's where you'd put the ordinary stuff:.
Appearance:
Job (Rank/Position)
Favorites: (Books / Movies / Music)
Sexual Prefs: (Preferred type of lover)
Birth data: (Age / Zodiac / Blood-type)
Health data: (Handicaps / allergies)
Education: (High school / University: degrees)
Home Town: (City/Country)
Extended Family: Parents or Creator / siblings / aunts / uncles / cousins...)
-- Well, that's where you'd put the ordinary stuff:.
Appearance:
Job (Rank/Position)
Favorites: (Books / Movies / Music)
Sexual Prefs: (Preferred type of lover)
Birth data: (Age / Zodiac / Blood-type)
Health data: (Handicaps / allergies)
Education: (High school / University: degrees)
Home Town: (City/Country)
Extended Family: Parents or Creator / siblings / aunts / uncles / cousins...)
You're welcome!
-- If you're interested in Character Generation Sheets, go here:
http://mrgone.rocksolidshells.com/misc.html
These are used for Role-Playing, but they'll work just fine for story characters too.
-- If you're interested in Character Generation Sheets, go here:
http://mrgone.rocksolidshells.com/misc.html
These are used for Role-Playing, but they'll work just fine for story characters too.
This is very helpful, and my friend gave me another good way (and I've read about this too), Just plain interviewing your character is a good way to know them. I did it and it went on for a good 3 pages and I still didn't get to finish it. (My character is pompous and he likes to talk in paragraphs at a time)
I enjoy research, but I agree. It takes an awful lot of reading through crap to find what you actually need.
I'm beginning to think that those people writing tutorials have been educated to write term papers because that's how they read -- long, drawn out, and BORING.
I'm beginning to think that those people writing tutorials have been educated to write term papers because that's how they read -- long, drawn out, and BORING.
Excellent!
-- A lot of character sheets have you detail all a character's physical aspects, but they never seem to delve into the Mental aspects -- and that's what one needs most to writes, one needs to know the character's Mind and Heart. Everything else is exchangeable.
-- A lot of character sheets have you detail all a character's physical aspects, but they never seem to delve into the Mental aspects -- and that's what one needs most to writes, one needs to know the character's Mind and Heart. Everything else is exchangeable.
The Ally is merely the one caught between the Hero & the Villain in the story. The Ally isn't normally in Every Scene, especially if the story has a small cast. It's when the story has a LARGE cast, like the movies Van Hellsing, Lord of the Rings or the Harry Potter films that you see an ally in just about every scene.
The Ally is merely the one caught between the Hero & the Villain in the story. The Ally isn't normally in Every Scene, especially if the story has a small cast. It's when the story has a LARGE cast, like the movies Van Hellsing, Lord of the Rings or the Harry Potter films that you see an ally in just about every scene.
Well, see, that's the thing. The character is Not supposed to be yourself.
Anyway... If you're determined to use yourself as a character, obviously your worst enemy (the school bully? your boss?) would be your Villain and your Best Friend/Lover would be your Ally.
The reason you're not supposed to use yourself is because no one has an unbiased / objective view of themselves. People tend to either Glorify themselves (Mary Sue/Harry Stu) or demonize themselves (Gloomy Sue / Gloomy Stu,) so much that even the readers can't stand the character. More often than not, using yourself can ruin an otherwise great story.
On the other hand I have read one particular story where the author said straight out that it was an author insertion -- but then admitted that the character kind of took off on him to become his own character. I was impressed as hell. It was a GREAT story.
Anyway... If you're determined to use yourself as a character, obviously your worst enemy (the school bully? your boss?) would be your Villain and your Best Friend/Lover would be your Ally.
The reason you're not supposed to use yourself is because no one has an unbiased / objective view of themselves. People tend to either Glorify themselves (Mary Sue/Harry Stu) or demonize themselves (Gloomy Sue / Gloomy Stu,) so much that even the readers can't stand the character. More often than not, using yourself can ruin an otherwise great story.
On the other hand I have read one particular story where the author said straight out that it was an author insertion -- but then admitted that the character kind of took off on him to become his own character. I was impressed as hell. It was a GREAT story.
hmm, interesting. my character well is a look a like of me, likes a few of my things, but other things are different. i don't want an exact me, but what i would look like in the story. things i should have done at an earlier time or something like that. i kind of suck at explaining things sry.
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