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Keran the Umbreon is soft-spoken and quiet to everybody except his mate Viera. The Delphox knows who he truly is; an ever-optimistic Umbreon full of big ideas and a drive to see them through. It has been over two weeks since the theft of their Orb, and Keran has come up with a plan: forming a rescue team, becoming famous, and using that influence to help them find the Orb. Keran's decision will put the two on a dangerous path, one that will require all of their skills to survive. But of course, the biggest obstacle in the Umbreon's path is convincing his mate to go along with the idea in the first place...
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WARNING: Contains attempted vore, violence, and harsh language. Do not click if you are underage, or if you do not enjoy any of those things.
And Chapter 3 is out! And it's the longest chapter yet, although I wrote it the fastest. Go figure. I actually had to cut a few scenes because the sheer length of this chapter was starting to make me question the words 'introductory series'. Chapter 3 stars Keran, the Umbreon that came to Lorne's rescue in chapter 1. Only two more chapters left before we can get started with the series proper.
Fun Fact™: As of Chapter Three, both of the two remaining main characters have either been explicitly shown or mentioned. Which ones could they be?
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WARNING: Contains attempted vore, violence, and harsh language. Do not click if you are underage, or if you do not enjoy any of those things.
And Chapter 3 is out! And it's the longest chapter yet, although I wrote it the fastest. Go figure. I actually had to cut a few scenes because the sheer length of this chapter was starting to make me question the words 'introductory series'. Chapter 3 stars Keran, the Umbreon that came to Lorne's rescue in chapter 1. Only two more chapters left before we can get started with the series proper.
Fun Fact™: As of Chapter Three, both of the two remaining main characters have either been explicitly shown or mentioned. Which ones could they be?
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Just managed to catch up with the series today, really fantastic writing and characters, I'm looking forward to seeing how Keran and Viera fare as Pokemon adventurers.
Also, unexpected twist at the end there, I wonder if Keran will have more experiences like that. X3
Also, unexpected twist at the end there, I wonder if Keran will have more experiences like that. X3
And I too am finally getting around to responding to the earlier parts I've skipped! It's fine if you don't respond to these late replies, I just wanna catch up on giving my thoughts here.
(For anyone reading this, there may be very minor spoilers, but I did my best to reveal as little as possible)
It really is interesting reading these out of order. I've taken note to the part where Keran considered eating that Arcanine; not only is this where he first showed his inner predatory instincts, it's also foreshadowing for some of what happens later. And that's something you've been building upon. That, and the friendship between Keran and Viera; you established it from the very beginning of the series and now that you're focusing on them, you can really expand upon that. Character development always has been a strong point of yours, and that's saying something with the huge cast you've been adding to over time.
If I had read this earlier though, I think I might have pointed out, didn't the two say they were against eating Pokemon back then? And yet, as if by instinct Keran was quick to begin eating Wendell with little hesitation. In the context of Part 1 you kinda made it seem like they, just like Lorne, would never do something like this. It had been a while since I read that part in full (I did however go and take another quick look just now), was there something I missed? Even now my guess is that Keran had suppressed such urges in the past, and that exposure to the local vorish acts along with swallowing that Apple made something click within him.
Not that I would've complained about this change in development either way.
(For anyone reading this, there may be very minor spoilers, but I did my best to reveal as little as possible)
It really is interesting reading these out of order. I've taken note to the part where Keran considered eating that Arcanine; not only is this where he first showed his inner predatory instincts, it's also foreshadowing for some of what happens later. And that's something you've been building upon. That, and the friendship between Keran and Viera; you established it from the very beginning of the series and now that you're focusing on them, you can really expand upon that. Character development always has been a strong point of yours, and that's saying something with the huge cast you've been adding to over time.
If I had read this earlier though, I think I might have pointed out, didn't the two say they were against eating Pokemon back then? And yet, as if by instinct Keran was quick to begin eating Wendell with little hesitation. In the context of Part 1 you kinda made it seem like they, just like Lorne, would never do something like this. It had been a while since I read that part in full (I did however go and take another quick look just now), was there something I missed? Even now my guess is that Keran had suppressed such urges in the past, and that exposure to the local vorish acts along with swallowing that Apple made something click within him.
Not that I would've complained about this change in development either way.
Thanks for the comments about my character development, it's always been something I enjoy focusing on. That's why I usually have so many characters running around, heheh. I like seeing how they change and interact with each other through the course of the story.
And all the questions that you're asking about Keran and Viera... it may seem like a cop-out, but all I can really say is that having these questions is normal. I have something planned for the two of them; their background is quite unusual, and they have a few big secrets they've been keeping from everyone this entire time. It'll all make sense over time, though.
And all the questions that you're asking about Keran and Viera... it may seem like a cop-out, but all I can really say is that having these questions is normal. I have something planned for the two of them; their background is quite unusual, and they have a few big secrets they've been keeping from everyone this entire time. It'll all make sense over time, though.
I'm now onto this chapter and I really enjoyed it! I found it interesting how Keran managed to control his hunger from getting the best of him, while still putting up a good fight. I wonder what Viera would have thought if she was awake? Great job on this, and I'll keep reading when I have time.
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