yes it is very nice and i think i noticed a difference between my poetry and yours most of my poems have the title repeated many times in them. This poem and your others don't mention the title once but it fits because it describes what the poem is about. Also I noticed something we have in commin in our poetry we like repitition to get our point across and it works very well. Over all an outstanding piece of work! Thank you very much bro.

No sweat big sis.*pounce hug and snuggles*