
Part one of a little story I'm working on.
Thinking of starting a Patreon where I could post all of it right away, since I gotta get through my last year of college. What do you guys think about that? How much would you be willing to pay for that, if you did?
part 2:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17844548/
part 3:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17865411/
There he is… the Big Bad Bear.
You’ve followed the sound of his snoring all the way up to his bedroom and now here you are, at the foot of his bed, looking up at him at a dust mite’s perspective, and he is… enormous. Absolutely unfathomably huge. You knew he’d be big from the size of the doors he built into this gigantic cabin of his, but you never pictured this titanic, round mountain of fat loudly filling itself with air again and again.
You pry your eyes away. You can’t just look at him all night… you’re here for a reason and your mind is made up.
You set off up the side of the bed, towards his head. The climb is easy. You’re an expert climber, and the sheet is so massive you can almost use the patterns on the fabric as climbing holds. It is quite far for you though… such a large bed for such a large bear… This guy must be something like twice as tall as anything you’ve ever seen.
You make it up. As your head peeks over the edge of the mattress the bear’s head comes into full view and you’re blasted by the sheer wall of sound that is his snoring. He snores with his maw open… perfect.
A chill runs up your spine at this thought. Are you really doing this…? You come up to his shoulder, hands trembling as they reach for his fur. What if he wakes up…? What if he finds you here, in his bed? What would he do? You’ve heard stories… how much he likes using those claws of his, and his teeth, that huge, powerful jaw. Watching it loll open as he snores, you have no doubt it could crush you open with barely any effort and you’d pop like a grape…
It’s worth it, you tell yourself. It’s worth the risk. You put your hands on the bear’s fur and use it to hoist yourself up. He doesn’t wake.
God, he snores so loud… You’re on his bare chest now. You can’t see beneath that sheet that comes up to the top bend of his gut, but you could bet he’s naked under there. You’re right between those two fat, droopy moobs and you’re being lifted with his breath. Rise, and fall. Rise, and fall. You look up and it’s like you’re at the foot of Belly Mountain… if someone were constantly pumping an entire ocean in and out of it. God, what a sight…
You feel a sudden gust of hot air wash over your back. It makes your spine tingle. You stand, frozen, as the bear snores for another breath, then lets it out again, directly at you, and it gusts all over and past you, embracing you in the warmth it borrowed from inside that titan of fat.
He’s not awake, is he…? You slowly regain control of your legs and start to turn…
It seems his head drooped forward some as he slept so that his chin was tucked into his neck and his breath now washes over his front as he breathes out. Your eyes naturally gravitate right between his big, plump lips.
Darkness. Wet, fleshy darkness. A cavernous entrance to a cavernous cavity, all teeth and tongue and drool and folds leading your eyes back, and back, and back, into his gullet, right inside that black crevasse of infinite hunger. You can see it pulsing, the muscles quaking in vibration every time he snores, and his jaw easing wider every time he breathes out, right onto you, all over you, inviting you to come closer… come inside… closer… be part of that warmth, housed in it. Give yourself to it. Lost to it… forever…
You blink. Your hand is on his lower lip. How did you get here…? You shouldn’t do this, it’s dangerous… he could chew on you in his sleep, or maybe… what if he swallows by reflex, when he feels a weight on his tongue or…
You are engulfed in shadow. You look up to see the looming form of his tongue, extending out of him and folding down towards you. He felt your hand pressing on his flesh, and before you can react, his tongue has scooped you up like a spare little chunk of meat just stuck to his lower lip.
“No, wait! Stop! WAIT!”
Your heart his trying to beat its way right up your throat. You’re not ready for this, it’s all happening so fast!
You try to get your bearings in that dark, fetid flesh prison, but you keep tumbling about, tossed and pressed and turned and worked this way and that by the bear’s maw. You’re soaked over in spoogy spit. You can barely breathe with the stuff splattering all over you and those muscles pressing in on you and squeezing you and dragging you and…
GULP
Thinking of starting a Patreon where I could post all of it right away, since I gotta get through my last year of college. What do you guys think about that? How much would you be willing to pay for that, if you did?
part 2:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17844548/
part 3:http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17865411/
There he is… the Big Bad Bear.
You’ve followed the sound of his snoring all the way up to his bedroom and now here you are, at the foot of his bed, looking up at him at a dust mite’s perspective, and he is… enormous. Absolutely unfathomably huge. You knew he’d be big from the size of the doors he built into this gigantic cabin of his, but you never pictured this titanic, round mountain of fat loudly filling itself with air again and again.
You pry your eyes away. You can’t just look at him all night… you’re here for a reason and your mind is made up.
You set off up the side of the bed, towards his head. The climb is easy. You’re an expert climber, and the sheet is so massive you can almost use the patterns on the fabric as climbing holds. It is quite far for you though… such a large bed for such a large bear… This guy must be something like twice as tall as anything you’ve ever seen.
You make it up. As your head peeks over the edge of the mattress the bear’s head comes into full view and you’re blasted by the sheer wall of sound that is his snoring. He snores with his maw open… perfect.
A chill runs up your spine at this thought. Are you really doing this…? You come up to his shoulder, hands trembling as they reach for his fur. What if he wakes up…? What if he finds you here, in his bed? What would he do? You’ve heard stories… how much he likes using those claws of his, and his teeth, that huge, powerful jaw. Watching it loll open as he snores, you have no doubt it could crush you open with barely any effort and you’d pop like a grape…
It’s worth it, you tell yourself. It’s worth the risk. You put your hands on the bear’s fur and use it to hoist yourself up. He doesn’t wake.
God, he snores so loud… You’re on his bare chest now. You can’t see beneath that sheet that comes up to the top bend of his gut, but you could bet he’s naked under there. You’re right between those two fat, droopy moobs and you’re being lifted with his breath. Rise, and fall. Rise, and fall. You look up and it’s like you’re at the foot of Belly Mountain… if someone were constantly pumping an entire ocean in and out of it. God, what a sight…
You feel a sudden gust of hot air wash over your back. It makes your spine tingle. You stand, frozen, as the bear snores for another breath, then lets it out again, directly at you, and it gusts all over and past you, embracing you in the warmth it borrowed from inside that titan of fat.
He’s not awake, is he…? You slowly regain control of your legs and start to turn…
It seems his head drooped forward some as he slept so that his chin was tucked into his neck and his breath now washes over his front as he breathes out. Your eyes naturally gravitate right between his big, plump lips.
Darkness. Wet, fleshy darkness. A cavernous entrance to a cavernous cavity, all teeth and tongue and drool and folds leading your eyes back, and back, and back, into his gullet, right inside that black crevasse of infinite hunger. You can see it pulsing, the muscles quaking in vibration every time he snores, and his jaw easing wider every time he breathes out, right onto you, all over you, inviting you to come closer… come inside… closer… be part of that warmth, housed in it. Give yourself to it. Lost to it… forever…
You blink. Your hand is on his lower lip. How did you get here…? You shouldn’t do this, it’s dangerous… he could chew on you in his sleep, or maybe… what if he swallows by reflex, when he feels a weight on his tongue or…
You are engulfed in shadow. You look up to see the looming form of his tongue, extending out of him and folding down towards you. He felt your hand pressing on his flesh, and before you can react, his tongue has scooped you up like a spare little chunk of meat just stuck to his lower lip.
“No, wait! Stop! WAIT!”
Your heart his trying to beat its way right up your throat. You’re not ready for this, it’s all happening so fast!
You try to get your bearings in that dark, fetid flesh prison, but you keep tumbling about, tossed and pressed and turned and worked this way and that by the bear’s maw. You’re soaked over in spoogy spit. You can barely breathe with the stuff splattering all over you and those muscles pressing in on you and squeezing you and dragging you and…
GULP
Category Story / Vore
Species Bear (Other)
Size 119 x 120px
File Size 13.4 kB
I have to admit, I'm intrigued by the prospect of fulltour and this looks promising...
not really sure what you're planning with a 1Ppatreon though- like, will the entire story be posted there right away, and gradually get posted chapter by chapter on FA? or will the rest of the story only be posted to Patreon? Will other stories also go up on Patreon in a similar manner?
not really sure what you're planning with a 1Ppatreon though- like, will the entire story be posted there right away, and gradually get posted chapter by chapter on FA? or will the rest of the story only be posted to Patreon? Will other stories also go up on Patreon in a similar manner?
Yeah, the idea is that the whole story would be finished and uploaded in its entirety on Patreon first, and then chapters would be posted here one by one. I'm also currently working on another story that's a little more ambitious, with characters and narrative and all those crazy things! It would also all be online on the Patreon first. I'd also offer bonus stuff such as rough drafts, WIP sneak peeks, and maybe even a Quest adventure game if people show interest and would like access to early versions.
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