you're definitely improving! although I can say three tiny things: 1- the arm tucked behind her is too wide, there should be space between her body and her arm *or* shrink the arm 2- her breast on that same side is concave, and curves inward too much, the line from pit to nip should be straighter. and 3- the hair is a little too straight at the ends. it needs to curve in the direction of the chin slightly. ^_^ Hope that helps.

yay boyfriend-critique lulz

well, that's a much shorter list than I usually have XD and smaller things than usual! *files that advice away for later use*

yay!

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