Funny. Bad poetry... nah! The rhymes have their use, they fit very well into the story, verses created when trying to get asleep. And very imaginitive approach to the prompt. I also searched for a bit more farfetched approach to fit the prompt to my own prose. Not bad, not bad at all. I even laughed a bit as I read this. Nice little piece, I enjoyed reading this.

Oikein mukava kevennys edellisten tarinoiden vuoristoradan jälkeen, vain pieni pätkä Veeranin ja Codyn elämästä. Hauska ja lämminhenkinen tarina.

I'm pleased that I made you laugh! ^_^ Lutien and I do that sometimes when I can't sleep, which gave me the idea to make Cody and Veeran do the same thing. Although our start line is "look at the angels in the sky" and we try to come up extremely silly things to continue it with.

It was nice and relaxing to write something completely different for Veeran and Cody, so yeah, it was good stuff. ^_^

Look at the griffin in the sky,
Cody's a rubbish poet and so am I!

Hours of fun.

Looks at the griffins in the sky
Angels are much more fun to fry.

^_^ Love you!

Look at the griffin in the sky,
It's a good job that she can fly.

Wow, so meta-physical- characters within a prompt being inspired by the prompt. I like it.

I'm pleased that you liked it! *beams*

That was a cute and entertaining story that made me feel good. And it's even better that it's based on truth.

Well, it is a universally acknowledged fact that griffins look good in purple ties... This was always meant to be a feel good story, so I'm glad it worked. ^_^

now that was just absolutely adorable...

it made for a rather nice diversion during my lunch break...

*hugs...

V.

*grins madly* You have no idea how pleased your approval makes me...

posh... *blushes... we are but of a like mind and the same... but I'm glad I could make you smile...

V.

Indeed. *warm smile* And perhaps I made you smile too, so we are even once more. *bows a little*

Daww! That was so very cute! Wonderful. And the poetry was not out of place at all.

Thanks very much! It was intended to be rather fluffy. ^_^ My fiance wanted to play that game again last night, and now I'm falling asleep into my breakfast cereal. The stories never talk about the mornings after...

Charming (in the cute and fun way, and not the pompous and 'oh, what have we here' way!) and very cleverly told. Again, the interplay of your two characters is lovely and I read the second half with a wide happy smile on mah mush. :)

*laughs* I'm glad you like it! It has so much of Lutien and me in it, I could post pages and pages of silly rhymes we come up with when we can't sleep. I've grown very fond of Veeran and Cody, although again I find it very difficult to write the next installment of the story. but I know it'll come out in time. *smile*

And hey, thanks for the fave! ^_^

Aww, cute! Pets the two wolfies. I've been mulling over something for a couple days that makes me want to write it more.

Err, you mean you pet the fox and the half-wolf? Ooh, what are you going to write? You should write lots and lots!!!!

Nope, I'm petting you and Lutien cause you're cute.

Oh, I see! Yes, we are very cute. And cuddly. Today especially. ^_^