
The exciting conclusion to
ianthegecko's commission!
Huck the Vast, Huck the Swole, Huck the Destroyer takes his vengeance out on the Dominion!
Huck ©
ianthegecko
All the rest © Moi

Huck the Vast, Huck the Swole, Huck the Destroyer takes his vengeance out on the Dominion!
Huck ©

All the rest © Moi
Category Story / Muscle
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Size 120 x 120px
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quite a way to end this story and saw how in his rule, improvements were made in the Dominion. I also know why Huxley is known by many names, like the Conqueror, the Destroyer, or even the White (Fenrir's story). Since his homeland makes an appearance in Fenrir's story, do we get a bit more backstory on what happened to his people?
Indeed, this is awesome!
Renard, you really have Huck's frat-boy intelligence down. It's really funny to read; I love seeing modern language twisted into fantasy settings. Plus reading your descriptions of every bulge and ripple in your guys' physiques. Of course it's hot, but still so detailed and descriptive that I wish I were there so much. Even if I didn't have this fetish I'd still enjoy every word because your stories go deeper than indulging in all these mounds and mounds of beef.
Renard, you really have Huck's frat-boy intelligence down. It's really funny to read; I love seeing modern language twisted into fantasy settings. Plus reading your descriptions of every bulge and ripple in your guys' physiques. Of course it's hot, but still so detailed and descriptive that I wish I were there so much. Even if I didn't have this fetish I'd still enjoy every word because your stories go deeper than indulging in all these mounds and mounds of beef.
"Hate" is a very strong word when I only said "no." You copy-pasta'd the same, extremely long phrase, what, five times? I can't recall because you deleted your comments- but more to the point, I have nothing against female growth. There'll be some of it in future stories. But seeing as I was commissioned by someone else to write this, I'm not even the right person to ask.
But no, I don't particularly like it, because I feel it doesn't fit Branka's character. She's quiet, attractive, but not in a traditional sense, and intelligent. She doesn't need gigantic muscles, and doesn't particularly want them. Huck does because.... well, it's his entire MO. I wouldn't say I hate it, but I just don't think it fits very well.
But no, I don't particularly like it, because I feel it doesn't fit Branka's character. She's quiet, attractive, but not in a traditional sense, and intelligent. She doesn't need gigantic muscles, and doesn't particularly want them. Huck does because.... well, it's his entire MO. I wouldn't say I hate it, but I just don't think it fits very well.
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