Hey I read your story, it feels nice overal and I really like the seting of victorian london and the industrial revolution. I think your story makes a large intro of what it's about, but at the same time I feel that what it tells is like resumed events of something that could go even larger and more detailed and the ending was rather... how to say it... like it happened but it did not prepared me to know what was going on or what was the whole purpose about it and that could be a problem for people who is fan of reading stuff. As I see this story it tells about someone from being a nobody to someone super famous and important. This actually gives enough material to make a big story, which I see a great potential to it. Kinda reminds me of one of my favorite movies "Steam Boy." You should keep making stories, perhaps eventually you could re-take this one and make it even larger, surely enough I believe it can be a great story from begining to end. I personally would like to know more about this secret company or group that the felines are part of and why are they manipulating him and why is the purpose of having someone as a "pupet" rather than they being the ones people will adore and see as the "great inventor". Anyways I really like your story and the idea behind it. Keep it up =)

Hey there.
Thanks for your feedback :3

This story was kinda born after a mental imagine I got during a night. I just wrote it down, embellished it with more ideas, and uploaded it. I love hinting at larger pictures in my stories, and leaving specific parts more vague to let the reader think about it a bit. Since I am a novice, though, this sometimes goes a bit awry. This is why I appreciate your review a lot. It helps me evolving as a writer~
I do have a larger storyline in mind, and one day, I will sit down and write more of it. I simply do not know when that day will be.
Thank you for your criticism. It will surely influence an eventual sequel/prequel, and I am happy you enjoyed this little piece of writing despite the flaws.