Random, simple, but entertaining!

And creepy, I hope.

Would need to grow into it, though I wouldn't want to meet you like that, seems dangerous

It is. Bio is basically like Blu's Cyber element, a darker personality.

interesting, always wishing corruption on the world I presume?

Yes.

Gah. I'm so far behind on reading FA stories, it's ridiculous.

But, I did finally get around to reading this story, and I really liked it. Just wonderfully fun and entertaining from start to finish.

I love how the character has mixed feelings about these new powers, both enjoying them, yet somewhat sickened by the knowledge of having such darkness within him.

That whole sense of discovery and experimentation plays out wonderfully, especially with his willingness to try them out on other animals. I really like the analytical approach used to see just what he's now capable of.

Keep up the great work. <3

Of course, I can't help but be curious about being hit by his bubblebeam and ending up trapped inside. ;)

Wow. Wall of text. O_o

Well, thanks for all the feedback, I'm glad you liked it!

I imagine being trapped in his bubblebeam would result in a slow painful suffocation.

Heh. Sorry about the length. I'm just not the type to simply say "great story" and walk away, without at least pointing out some of the things I liked most about it.

And it sounds as if neither of us know for sure about what happens. Hopefully I can test that out some day and resolve this mystery.

It's good to get someone who writes text wall feedback on your stuff now and then.

If you haven't, feel free to comment on my many other submissions, I'd love to hear what you think of The Inherited, in particular.