
So, yesterday, I came up with a game design, and had a flood of ideas for this game that I call Peck 'n' Chomp. It's kind of like Banjo Kazooie or Yooka Laylee where it's about two animal buddies that cooperate, but the difference being in this that Peck the Oxpecker and Chomp the Alligator could separate from each other to do things the other couldn't do, but at the same time, Chomp would get a slight mobility boost while Peck was riding him.
The problem I'm facing, however, is I can't really seem to give this guy much of a visual identity. Apart from being a cute, pudgy gator with big goofy eyes and deceptively friendly smile... I just don't feel that there's much character in his appearance.
He's a pretty good swimmer, takes out most enemies in a single gulp, is very strong, and not the brightest guy, so your typical brawn character. I just feel that his appearance isn't very identifiable. I tried a few alternate color palettes, but still, I need some advice. Any ideas you guys might have?
Funny thing to note about Peck is I've already imagined him looking nothing like a real oxpecker, and more a different type of bird entirely.
Anywho, gimme some feedback, because I already like this character a lot, and I wanna make him good, because I also wanna see this game idea through.
The problem I'm facing, however, is I can't really seem to give this guy much of a visual identity. Apart from being a cute, pudgy gator with big goofy eyes and deceptively friendly smile... I just don't feel that there's much character in his appearance.
He's a pretty good swimmer, takes out most enemies in a single gulp, is very strong, and not the brightest guy, so your typical brawn character. I just feel that his appearance isn't very identifiable. I tried a few alternate color palettes, but still, I need some advice. Any ideas you guys might have?
Funny thing to note about Peck is I've already imagined him looking nothing like a real oxpecker, and more a different type of bird entirely.
Anywho, gimme some feedback, because I already like this character a lot, and I wanna make him good, because I also wanna see this game idea through.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Doodle
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 138 x 104px
File Size 13.3 kB
Listed in Folders
Take a look at this guy:
http://www.freemake.com/blog/wp-con.....pe-monster.png
Why is he so cute and memorable? The design is very simple. Not a lot of small detail. And the prominent features (eyes, mouth, teeth) are the parts that pop out to the viewer the most. Could you follow a similar pattern for your gator?
http://www.freemake.com/blog/wp-con.....pe-monster.png
Why is he so cute and memorable? The design is very simple. Not a lot of small detail. And the prominent features (eyes, mouth, teeth) are the parts that pop out to the viewer the most. Could you follow a similar pattern for your gator?
Hmm well if you ask me the default color, or maybe just the favored one for the bigger sprite that is animated, is a bit commonly used, maybe the 2nd option would work a bit more. Speaking of the animation, maybe there you could spruce him up a little, maybe change it up a little from the fairly stock idle animation there, give him a different motion maybe like have him humming a tune [as shown by say a note appearing near him] and bobbing his head side to side or something? My point there being look for another way to add a bit of an individual flare to him.
Don't really know what you can do in his current complete state unless you add something to him. I can already tell he's pretty cute, (emphasised by slight chubbiness, big adorable, smiley head and stumpy claws). I'd say its really what you do to him with the game that will determine the visual identity he has. As with Teric's idea, simplicity is key, and your character is very simple and cute in style, but I think with Om-nom it might be slightly different because he is a vector character (hope I'm using that term right) while yours is pixel. I wouldn't emphasise the eyes, mouth and teeth of your gator much more as I fear it would distort him (he already has dinner-plate eyes and making the mouth bigger on a gator might make him scary). I'd say so far, Chomp is exactly as adorable and memorable as he needs to be, nothing wrong with a cute, pudgy gator with big goofy eyes and deceptively friendly smile. ^^
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