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DragonX1010 featuring his characters
DragonX1010 featuring his characters
Category All / Vore
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 2021 x 1658px
File Size 2.41 MB
That internal maw shot is magnificent! I love how gentle the dragon is with him too.
I will offer a small criticism if it's welcomed: your text color in a lot of your work does not mesh well with the backgrounds, even when you have transparent bubbles around them. I know your style is to match it with the dominant/unique color of the character, but to make it easier to read you should consider modifying the colors or finding another way to indicate the speaker. I'm sure you're aware of this but to cover all the bases I'm going to say it anyway: a common convention is to use bubbles without pointers to indicate speakers that are out of the scene, and with pointers otherwise; they don't even necessarily have to be big obtrusive pointers either. Also Comic Sans is a tad overused but that's a much more nitpicky point. If you want it to still be comic-like but a bit more serious I recommend trying out Comic Neue (http://comicneue.com/) or another sans-serif typeface.
Take it as you wish. Great job though!
I will offer a small criticism if it's welcomed: your text color in a lot of your work does not mesh well with the backgrounds, even when you have transparent bubbles around them. I know your style is to match it with the dominant/unique color of the character, but to make it easier to read you should consider modifying the colors or finding another way to indicate the speaker. I'm sure you're aware of this but to cover all the bases I'm going to say it anyway: a common convention is to use bubbles without pointers to indicate speakers that are out of the scene, and with pointers otherwise; they don't even necessarily have to be big obtrusive pointers either. Also Comic Sans is a tad overused but that's a much more nitpicky point. If you want it to still be comic-like but a bit more serious I recommend trying out Comic Neue (http://comicneue.com/) or another sans-serif typeface.
Take it as you wish. Great job though!
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