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stupid roomates: the encounter [story in description weee!]
hey guys im trying to make comics of one page about this guys or stories so how about starting the encounter shall we??
shiva and clyde belongs to me
inspiration of the anime called '' nana'' [which i need to warch]
hope yer like!
We never thougth that crossing our lifes could changes us compleatly in a cold cozy town called "frostbite town".
It's beautiful with its snow covering the town in winter.
-My name is shiva, im a female anthro white cat,with a black spot on my left eye, im a transfered artist teacher for now on ,i live with my roomate ,i cook and clean the room .
-my name is clyde , im a male anthro shark with black and gray skin ,people confuses me with a killer whale when i mention it, im part of a band where i play in the bars and anthros of the town,i work at night,i live with my roomate,i take care of washing dishes and keep clean the room...thats at least i can do there.
Our story begins one day before we arrivied the town from the far away where summer is always there even in winter ........
*in a girly pink room a phone starts ringing as a female cat answers the phone*
-Hello? Yes its me whats the matter?....hhhmm? ...ah ah reunion? Alright i will go there........urgently? Seriously?...im in my way .
"I hang off my phone after hearing that the school were i work needs something urgently of me ,i go out and tell my parents i was going out (which of course i was living with them for a good time) i went and took the taxi taking me directly to my school, i said hi to everybody from the work and meet my boss of his office,he was an anthro black dragon with a gray suit ,he turn to see me and offer me to sit in front of his desk,after taking sit he remain silent for a moment and sigh in a discomforting tune,he look out at the window and look back to me,obviously my mind was blank of what he wanted exactly,finally he opens his lips ready to talk"
-How long you were working for me?.
"The question hit my doubts and answer him in a confused way"
-about 3 years sir ,why do you ask?
"After asking him he spin on his wheelchair to give me his back and then later stand up firm ,stretching a bit his wings he once again turns to see me"
-I have a school here and another one on frostbite town,where my younger brother leads the school for me,unfoturnally there isnt an artist teacher in there , shiva i hate to say this but please help me to become the teacher on that school ,i-i will give you a rise on you accout ,50%
- w-what!? But i would be far from my family!
"In respond to my boss yes ,i thinked of leaving from the house of my parents and get a house for me,but not to far from my family,my boss looked worrier so he once again insist"
-I will give you the double then!But please .....accept this for me.....
"I got worried......what if my parents need money? Well the banks can help ...but ....i would be all alone in a town that i don't know,but its an oppurtunity to grab money for a house,i sighed in full of doubts, but what else can i lose? ,i thinked alot for a few minutes then looked at my boss with an unsecure face hitting the palm of my hands on my lap.*
-Fine....when i go?
-oooh thank you shiva! I own you alot ,tomorrow in the morning i will buy you a ticket plane to frostbite.
"After he said that i stand up and shake his hand and come back to my house giving them the news to my parents,somehow they give an expression between happiness and sadness on me,i prepared my things to go tomorrow at my airplane,my life would change after taking step inside that airplane,it was my big day.
The next day after i arrivied at frostbite and see the place covered by so much snow,so could yet beautyful,i go visit the school in there where my new boss give me tour around to memorize all the place,he even give me a recommendation to stay in a department on a building not to far,it got late so i decided to go there ,the building wasnt that big but it was really cozy,not many were there but i decided to stay anyway, when i decided to meet the owner on his office i slip in front of somebody,he catched me with his strong hands and lift me up,i look at him and i see this anthro black shark with a leather jacket....."
-H-hello ......
*in a garage 3 rocksters were talking each other,2 were humans but one it was an anthro shark ,they were waiting for for his other 2 companions for news since they had problems lately,they couldn't get any good places were they could play since there were many bands on the bars and anthros*
-hhrrmmmpp......
"Just thinking that we don't get enough money it affects us badly,and especially if we dont get a place to play, this town is full of bands that they want to show their talents too,if there was at least a town were to play...thats what i have in my mind so badly,my foot taps despairtly of the news,our other 2 comrades enters to the garage with long faces (they are humans too), didn't want to ask knowing what happend ,i growl in a bit of anger looking away*
-sorry guys....we couldnt get one
"I didn't even look at them then i answer them"
-its alright ...like we can even do a thing
- uuum guys....i have a....suggestion
"One of my comrades stretched his hand up looking nervous and unsure,what he had in his mind? I dunnp it didnt hit me so i made him to spit the info"
-say it....
-w-well....uum i heard that there is a town that has many anthros and bars at night, but its far....and cold... the town is known as frostbite town
-Wait what!?
"Another of my comrades reacts with a disbelief knowing that its pretty dumb the suggestion,going far so people could get attention to us? Man i even don't like so much cold but in the end in my mind i thinked it was a good idea,the leader of the band ,thinked the same and he speak up*
-its a good oppurtinity,
-you are joking
-no no of course im not,its a good oppurtinity for us ,we can be in the reds by people who starts to like our music,guys think of it!
"Everybody was in doubt except me,i streched my hand up and look on them with a straight face"
- im in
"Everybody looked at me and sighed in doubt except the leader,they shake their heads with no other option"
-when we go?
- tomorrow in the morning
"Everybody nods as we go and prepared our belongings,we buyed our tickets to the airplane and go directly to the frostbite town the next day,after arriving we spot the town somehow beautiful by the snow,it was pretty nice,but awfully cold ,we then start to visit bars and anthros .....but most of them reject us .....we were losing hopes and thinked this was a bad idea from the begining ....until one good bar accept us!we were happy about after that,we show the owner of the bar our music and he loved it,he told us we can work at night ,i was so happy and so do my comrades,the owner was so good person that he even reccomend us a building were departments were good and cheap,it was getting late so we decided to visit there,cheeering our succed on the way,after we arrivied the owner shows us our rooms.....or actually the rooms of my comrades,i couldnt fit on a room with them since we were 5 ,each room is 2 person occupation,the owner seem concern so he decide to go to his office if he can do something,i was mad tapping my foot on the floor in mad "
-what takes him so long?
"I asked myself mad going down to the office of the owner,when suddendly i heard somebody going to fall next to me,my reaction made catched that person,it felt so delicate,yet soft,i looked at the person,it was an anthro white cat with a black spot on her left eye.....*
H-hi......
Our lifes crossed since that day,the owner of the building comes out and see the two of us,he blinked for a moment then got the idea,he suggest us to become roomates,obviously we both start to thinked it was good,we could pay 50-50 for it,but we then thinked this was a bad idea too,i mean,a cat and a shark living together? Its pretty bizzare,but we both didn't want to pay to much,we both stand up properly and asked for the room for us.
After taking us there we see it was big enough for the two of us,we were compleatly strangers.......but somehow we could trust each other.. . Somehow we felt....this will be a crazy life for the both of us,our life will be not the same.
shiva and clyde belongs to me
inspiration of the anime called '' nana'' [which i need to warch]
hope yer like!
We never thougth that crossing our lifes could changes us compleatly in a cold cozy town called "frostbite town".
It's beautiful with its snow covering the town in winter.
-My name is shiva, im a female anthro white cat,with a black spot on my left eye, im a transfered artist teacher for now on ,i live with my roomate ,i cook and clean the room .
-my name is clyde , im a male anthro shark with black and gray skin ,people confuses me with a killer whale when i mention it, im part of a band where i play in the bars and anthros of the town,i work at night,i live with my roomate,i take care of washing dishes and keep clean the room...thats at least i can do there.
Our story begins one day before we arrivied the town from the far away where summer is always there even in winter ........
*in a girly pink room a phone starts ringing as a female cat answers the phone*
-Hello? Yes its me whats the matter?....hhhmm? ...ah ah reunion? Alright i will go there........urgently? Seriously?...im in my way .
"I hang off my phone after hearing that the school were i work needs something urgently of me ,i go out and tell my parents i was going out (which of course i was living with them for a good time) i went and took the taxi taking me directly to my school, i said hi to everybody from the work and meet my boss of his office,he was an anthro black dragon with a gray suit ,he turn to see me and offer me to sit in front of his desk,after taking sit he remain silent for a moment and sigh in a discomforting tune,he look out at the window and look back to me,obviously my mind was blank of what he wanted exactly,finally he opens his lips ready to talk"
-How long you were working for me?.
"The question hit my doubts and answer him in a confused way"
-about 3 years sir ,why do you ask?
"After asking him he spin on his wheelchair to give me his back and then later stand up firm ,stretching a bit his wings he once again turns to see me"
-I have a school here and another one on frostbite town,where my younger brother leads the school for me,unfoturnally there isnt an artist teacher in there , shiva i hate to say this but please help me to become the teacher on that school ,i-i will give you a rise on you accout ,50%
- w-what!? But i would be far from my family!
"In respond to my boss yes ,i thinked of leaving from the house of my parents and get a house for me,but not to far from my family,my boss looked worrier so he once again insist"
-I will give you the double then!But please .....accept this for me.....
"I got worried......what if my parents need money? Well the banks can help ...but ....i would be all alone in a town that i don't know,but its an oppurtunity to grab money for a house,i sighed in full of doubts, but what else can i lose? ,i thinked alot for a few minutes then looked at my boss with an unsecure face hitting the palm of my hands on my lap.*
-Fine....when i go?
-oooh thank you shiva! I own you alot ,tomorrow in the morning i will buy you a ticket plane to frostbite.
"After he said that i stand up and shake his hand and come back to my house giving them the news to my parents,somehow they give an expression between happiness and sadness on me,i prepared my things to go tomorrow at my airplane,my life would change after taking step inside that airplane,it was my big day.
The next day after i arrivied at frostbite and see the place covered by so much snow,so could yet beautyful,i go visit the school in there where my new boss give me tour around to memorize all the place,he even give me a recommendation to stay in a department on a building not to far,it got late so i decided to go there ,the building wasnt that big but it was really cozy,not many were there but i decided to stay anyway, when i decided to meet the owner on his office i slip in front of somebody,he catched me with his strong hands and lift me up,i look at him and i see this anthro black shark with a leather jacket....."
-H-hello ......
*in a garage 3 rocksters were talking each other,2 were humans but one it was an anthro shark ,they were waiting for for his other 2 companions for news since they had problems lately,they couldn't get any good places were they could play since there were many bands on the bars and anthros*
-hhrrmmmpp......
"Just thinking that we don't get enough money it affects us badly,and especially if we dont get a place to play, this town is full of bands that they want to show their talents too,if there was at least a town were to play...thats what i have in my mind so badly,my foot taps despairtly of the news,our other 2 comrades enters to the garage with long faces (they are humans too), didn't want to ask knowing what happend ,i growl in a bit of anger looking away*
-sorry guys....we couldnt get one
"I didn't even look at them then i answer them"
-its alright ...like we can even do a thing
- uuum guys....i have a....suggestion
"One of my comrades stretched his hand up looking nervous and unsure,what he had in his mind? I dunnp it didnt hit me so i made him to spit the info"
-say it....
-w-well....uum i heard that there is a town that has many anthros and bars at night, but its far....and cold... the town is known as frostbite town
-Wait what!?
"Another of my comrades reacts with a disbelief knowing that its pretty dumb the suggestion,going far so people could get attention to us? Man i even don't like so much cold but in the end in my mind i thinked it was a good idea,the leader of the band ,thinked the same and he speak up*
-its a good oppurtinity,
-you are joking
-no no of course im not,its a good oppurtinity for us ,we can be in the reds by people who starts to like our music,guys think of it!
"Everybody was in doubt except me,i streched my hand up and look on them with a straight face"
- im in
"Everybody looked at me and sighed in doubt except the leader,they shake their heads with no other option"
-when we go?
- tomorrow in the morning
"Everybody nods as we go and prepared our belongings,we buyed our tickets to the airplane and go directly to the frostbite town the next day,after arriving we spot the town somehow beautiful by the snow,it was pretty nice,but awfully cold ,we then start to visit bars and anthros .....but most of them reject us .....we were losing hopes and thinked this was a bad idea from the begining ....until one good bar accept us!we were happy about after that,we show the owner of the bar our music and he loved it,he told us we can work at night ,i was so happy and so do my comrades,the owner was so good person that he even reccomend us a building were departments were good and cheap,it was getting late so we decided to visit there,cheeering our succed on the way,after we arrivied the owner shows us our rooms.....or actually the rooms of my comrades,i couldnt fit on a room with them since we were 5 ,each room is 2 person occupation,the owner seem concern so he decide to go to his office if he can do something,i was mad tapping my foot on the floor in mad "
-what takes him so long?
"I asked myself mad going down to the office of the owner,when suddendly i heard somebody going to fall next to me,my reaction made catched that person,it felt so delicate,yet soft,i looked at the person,it was an anthro white cat with a black spot on her left eye.....*
H-hi......
Our lifes crossed since that day,the owner of the building comes out and see the two of us,he blinked for a moment then got the idea,he suggest us to become roomates,obviously we both start to thinked it was good,we could pay 50-50 for it,but we then thinked this was a bad idea too,i mean,a cat and a shark living together? Its pretty bizzare,but we both didn't want to pay to much,we both stand up properly and asked for the room for us.
After taking us there we see it was big enough for the two of us,we were compleatly strangers.......but somehow we could trust each other.. . Somehow we felt....this will be a crazy life for the both of us,our life will be not the same.
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That is a preety solid plot, especially for first time writing. I like it!
I have to be honest though, from a grammar standpoint this is an editing disaster.
I'm not a professional by any means, but if you felt like giving it a try I could beta it for you.
I hope I didn't come across as offensive, by the way. I'd hate that. ^^'
I have to be honest though, from a grammar standpoint this is an editing disaster.
I'm not a professional by any means, but if you felt like giving it a try I could beta it for you.
I hope I didn't come across as offensive, by the way. I'd hate that. ^^'
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