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Hi, so!! If anyone is interested at all, I’m starting up my webcomic again! Here’s a few panels from it, there’s just under 30 pages up right now. I was dissatisfied with my old work, so I decided to do it again (not much has changed!)
It’s a comic about mundanity, and the lives/fears of a group of students. (Also if anyone has ANY feedback to give whatsoever I will love you to pieces. Positive and negative, be honest.)
READ FROM THE BEGINNING HERE!!
It’s a comic about mundanity, and the lives/fears of a group of students. (Also if anyone has ANY feedback to give whatsoever I will love you to pieces. Positive and negative, be honest.)
READ FROM THE BEGINNING HERE!!
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This is very charming...the narration and atmosphere are really impressive! Also i can really relate tp charles' situation X3
My only critique would be to go easier with the cross-hatching on the backgrounds, allow more negative space in your panels,expecially when there's a lot of details already ( such as when city buildings are shown)
Aside from that it's really really beautiful and i hope to read more tyto!
My only critique would be to go easier with the cross-hatching on the backgrounds, allow more negative space in your panels,expecially when there's a lot of details already ( such as when city buildings are shown)
Aside from that it's really really beautiful and i hope to read more tyto!
Yoooo!! Good luck with this one! Loving the more solemn start, and the artwork is beautiful as always.
I agree with allowing for more places for your eye to rest, as while crosshatching makes gorgeous shading, it can
easily become too busy. I think lightening the backgrounds a little would help with depth too, especially in outdoor scenes!
The pacing is great though, slow and steady but also sucks you in. Excited to read more :D
I agree with allowing for more places for your eye to rest, as while crosshatching makes gorgeous shading, it can
easily become too busy. I think lightening the backgrounds a little would help with depth too, especially in outdoor scenes!
The pacing is great though, slow and steady but also sucks you in. Excited to read more :D
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