[Note*: This is a rough draft not the official deal of my old short story I wrote when bored]
[Old Version] ~
It was a midnight with a crescent moon hanging from the sky with a few speckles of stars around it sloppily put onto mother natures canvas. Acier was in the forest lying inside of his den hidden in the very back of a pitch black cave. Hearing the predator and prey sounds of night his harks swiveling this way and that way picking up there very location of where they may be hidden, he starts to become agitated that he can not get any sleep for tommorow to come and go. Finally fed up with it he gains to his pads and starts trotting outside of the cave knowing that right beside the entrance there was a few mice and insects in the green bushes trying to avoid being eaten by there predators lurking through the grounds.
Now off the cold slate of the cave his den resided in he stepped onto the green plush foliage that spurted from a bunch of different spots in the darkened soil from yesterdays disastrous rainstorm which built some barricades around the forest making it slightly difficult for him now as he sees it will require effort and endurance. Now approaching the so called barricade, which was not that high and was able to be jumped he gives his hind legs a forceful push off the ground and floats like a demonic wolf he is landing on the other side without any effort put into it whatsoever. Trotting past a few trees getting ready to hunt his nightly venison for his seamless pangs of hunger to disappear. Passing a tree he catches a quick blur of something and uses his agile agility to quickly turn around seeing nothing was there.
Moving his harks around he tries to pick up a sound but epicly fails at doing so for the invader was too quick to be picked up. “Calm down Acier it is just probually a small jackrabbit.” he said trying to reassure himself that there is no harm about to happen to anyone or anything. Again another blur catches the corner of his eye but this time closer as he made his observation the last time seeing the blur of fur far from him now close up. WHAM! Acier was assaulted on his rib cage with a sickening crunch knocking the wind out of his lungs. Knowing this is a life or death situation he quickly regains to his paws ignoring the sharp pain in his ribs almost letting out a yip of unbearable hurt. What was he thinking pain in always just a feeling not something he can not ignore, slowly trusting in his guts he lets out a hind kick feeling that he has made contact against something.
“Oof.” he wears from the stranger quickly turning around just in time to see the female wolf fall to the ground her belly facing upwards. Just responding instead of thinking he quickly gets on top of her pinning her to the forest floor asking in hostility, “Who are you, and who sent you?”, not giving her time to answer he also includes, “Why did you attack me?” he gives a clashing sound from slamming his teeth together but realizes it is not right and just lets her gain to her paws again. Huge f****** mistake he thought in regret as he was pinned to the floor by the female, who was now taunting him. “Haha looks who is helpless now you little brute!” she says in a playful teasing voice. Giving a little retreat claws in and push out action to her belly he sends her flying enough to get himself back onto his feet, and then immediately rams her enough to bring her onto his should into a shrubbery pinning her inside so she does not get hurt neither.
“You were saying?” he says giving off a glimpse of his canine teeth as his blackish reddish pelt contracted over his muscles showing how much of a brute he is, however he has a really caring and loving side to him.
[TO BE UPDATED INTO A FIXED VERSION AND CONTINUED]
[Old Version] ~
It was a midnight with a crescent moon hanging from the sky with a few speckles of stars around it sloppily put onto mother natures canvas. Acier was in the forest lying inside of his den hidden in the very back of a pitch black cave. Hearing the predator and prey sounds of night his harks swiveling this way and that way picking up there very location of where they may be hidden, he starts to become agitated that he can not get any sleep for tommorow to come and go. Finally fed up with it he gains to his pads and starts trotting outside of the cave knowing that right beside the entrance there was a few mice and insects in the green bushes trying to avoid being eaten by there predators lurking through the grounds.
Now off the cold slate of the cave his den resided in he stepped onto the green plush foliage that spurted from a bunch of different spots in the darkened soil from yesterdays disastrous rainstorm which built some barricades around the forest making it slightly difficult for him now as he sees it will require effort and endurance. Now approaching the so called barricade, which was not that high and was able to be jumped he gives his hind legs a forceful push off the ground and floats like a demonic wolf he is landing on the other side without any effort put into it whatsoever. Trotting past a few trees getting ready to hunt his nightly venison for his seamless pangs of hunger to disappear. Passing a tree he catches a quick blur of something and uses his agile agility to quickly turn around seeing nothing was there.
Moving his harks around he tries to pick up a sound but epicly fails at doing so for the invader was too quick to be picked up. “Calm down Acier it is just probually a small jackrabbit.” he said trying to reassure himself that there is no harm about to happen to anyone or anything. Again another blur catches the corner of his eye but this time closer as he made his observation the last time seeing the blur of fur far from him now close up. WHAM! Acier was assaulted on his rib cage with a sickening crunch knocking the wind out of his lungs. Knowing this is a life or death situation he quickly regains to his paws ignoring the sharp pain in his ribs almost letting out a yip of unbearable hurt. What was he thinking pain in always just a feeling not something he can not ignore, slowly trusting in his guts he lets out a hind kick feeling that he has made contact against something.
“Oof.” he wears from the stranger quickly turning around just in time to see the female wolf fall to the ground her belly facing upwards. Just responding instead of thinking he quickly gets on top of her pinning her to the forest floor asking in hostility, “Who are you, and who sent you?”, not giving her time to answer he also includes, “Why did you attack me?” he gives a clashing sound from slamming his teeth together but realizes it is not right and just lets her gain to her paws again. Huge f****** mistake he thought in regret as he was pinned to the floor by the female, who was now taunting him. “Haha looks who is helpless now you little brute!” she says in a playful teasing voice. Giving a little retreat claws in and push out action to her belly he sends her flying enough to get himself back onto his feet, and then immediately rams her enough to bring her onto his should into a shrubbery pinning her inside so she does not get hurt neither.
“You were saying?” he says giving off a glimpse of his canine teeth as his blackish reddish pelt contracted over his muscles showing how much of a brute he is, however he has a really caring and loving side to him.
[TO BE UPDATED INTO A FIXED VERSION AND CONTINUED]
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