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Five Pokemon, all with their own stories to tell, all with their own secrets to keep. Night has fallen, but all of them are unable to sleep. Team Travelers has begun, but what will become of the new Rescue Team? The moonlight holds no answers...
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Part of me can't believe that we've come this far, but here it is. The last submission for Meeting the Travelers. This concludes the prologue series, and from now on the real series, simply called The Travelers, can begin. Trust me, this isn't even close to the last you'll see of these five characters.
This chapter is still submitted under vore, just to keep it in the same category as the rest of my series, but there isn't any vore in the epilogue. Just five restless Pokemon, as well as a brief glimpse of what is to come.
As always, feel free to comment about anything about the series. Your favourite characters, your least favourite characters, what you felt worked or didn't work, anything you can think of. I always love hearing what people think of my work. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoyed the series!
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Part of me can't believe that we've come this far, but here it is. The last submission for Meeting the Travelers. This concludes the prologue series, and from now on the real series, simply called The Travelers, can begin. Trust me, this isn't even close to the last you'll see of these five characters.
This chapter is still submitted under vore, just to keep it in the same category as the rest of my series, but there isn't any vore in the epilogue. Just five restless Pokemon, as well as a brief glimpse of what is to come.
As always, feel free to comment about anything about the series. Your favourite characters, your least favourite characters, what you felt worked or didn't work, anything you can think of. I always love hearing what people think of my work. Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoyed the series!
Category Story / Vore
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File Size 18.8 kB
Listed in Folders
Finished power-reading the whole series thus far. For sake of convenience, all my thoughts so far will be placed in this single comment.
1: You're a good writer. A damn good writer. You're style is very different from my own, as well as the other writers I've encountered with this Pokemon universe we're forming.
2: The story is very interesting. Plot wise, there is a strong sense of conflict that I'm interested in seeing more of. The bias between the "civvies" and the "wildlings", the whole of River's vengence plot, and the mysteries behind Viera and Keran.
3: I love the little nod to the project I did with the multiple OC's last chapter. I had a small chuckle at the "eyes" bit personally!
all in all, I love the series thus far, and am eager to see it continue under it's new name.
1: You're a good writer. A damn good writer. You're style is very different from my own, as well as the other writers I've encountered with this Pokemon universe we're forming.
2: The story is very interesting. Plot wise, there is a strong sense of conflict that I'm interested in seeing more of. The bias between the "civvies" and the "wildlings", the whole of River's vengence plot, and the mysteries behind Viera and Keran.
3: I love the little nod to the project I did with the multiple OC's last chapter. I had a small chuckle at the "eyes" bit personally!
all in all, I love the series thus far, and am eager to see it continue under it's new name.
1. Thanks, that really means a lot to me. Writing's something I've been passionate about for a long time now ^^
2. Oh yeah, the civvies/wildlings conflict plays a pretty major part in the story, far more so than even than we've seen so far. River's arc is also something I'm looking forward to writing, it's got a few twists and turns in it I think people will like.
3. Haha, I went in and added that little bit at the last second since the two chapters came out only a couple days apart. I'm glad I got a laugh out of it!
Thanks for reading through all my chapters, and I'm looking forward to your new series too!
2. Oh yeah, the civvies/wildlings conflict plays a pretty major part in the story, far more so than even than we've seen so far. River's arc is also something I'm looking forward to writing, it's got a few twists and turns in it I think people will like.
3. Haha, I went in and added that little bit at the last second since the two chapters came out only a couple days apart. I'm glad I got a laugh out of it!
Thanks for reading through all my chapters, and I'm looking forward to your new series too!
Well, I finally decided to get around to this. Where to start...
I came into this knowing absolutely nothing about anything you've done, really only with the endorsement of both TastyTales and Gray. As I hold them and their opinions in incredibly high regard, I was pretty excited. I decided to what I did with Gray and power through this first series in one sitting.
And... this might sound like an odd thing to say, but this really felt like a prologue series, and I mean that in a good and a bad way.
On the positive side, you're obviously a very skilled writer. That much goes without saying. Hell, I felt envious of what I was reading almost from the get-go. And the character cast, which I value far more than a great narrative, is quite a fun bunch. I'm not saying the narrative is bad (since it's obviously not), but I really did like the variety to the characters; their backgrounds (whether elaborated on a lot or not) are interesting, the chemistry is excellent... I really did enjoy them.
On the negative side... it's a lot of backstory. Part of it is because, well, this was written back in 2015 and I'm here reading it in 2017, but it felt like sooooooo much just to introduce your characters for the series that follows. Sure, it was good, but I could feel myself getting burned out toward the end of every chapter except this epilogue. Now I worry that every main chapter onward is like this, though what's here is plenty interesting to me, and it's a little off-putting. I'm glad I did this series in one night, since spacing it out between nights would make it seem that much longer.
But this was still a good read. I'm glad I finally got around to it... even if there's still a lot for me to work through. I'm just hoping I enjoy what's to come, rather than progressively feel like I'm just slogging through it.
I came into this knowing absolutely nothing about anything you've done, really only with the endorsement of both TastyTales and Gray. As I hold them and their opinions in incredibly high regard, I was pretty excited. I decided to what I did with Gray and power through this first series in one sitting.
And... this might sound like an odd thing to say, but this really felt like a prologue series, and I mean that in a good and a bad way.
On the positive side, you're obviously a very skilled writer. That much goes without saying. Hell, I felt envious of what I was reading almost from the get-go. And the character cast, which I value far more than a great narrative, is quite a fun bunch. I'm not saying the narrative is bad (since it's obviously not), but I really did like the variety to the characters; their backgrounds (whether elaborated on a lot or not) are interesting, the chemistry is excellent... I really did enjoy them.
On the negative side... it's a lot of backstory. Part of it is because, well, this was written back in 2015 and I'm here reading it in 2017, but it felt like sooooooo much just to introduce your characters for the series that follows. Sure, it was good, but I could feel myself getting burned out toward the end of every chapter except this epilogue. Now I worry that every main chapter onward is like this, though what's here is plenty interesting to me, and it's a little off-putting. I'm glad I did this series in one night, since spacing it out between nights would make it seem that much longer.
But this was still a good read. I'm glad I finally got around to it... even if there's still a lot for me to work through. I'm just hoping I enjoy what's to come, rather than progressively feel like I'm just slogging through it.
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