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Just an introduction "chapter" to a story I'm writing about some stuff and things that I designed. Sorry my writing sucks so much and I probably failed to describe things that needed describing (especially in the upcoming second part) and bleh
Category Story / Inflation
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File Size 62.5 kB
Firstly, your writing does by no means "suck"! This wuff has been a tech editor and evaluator of thousands upon thousands of pages of technical writing across multiple decades, and has seen some truly atrocious examples of "suckage", and yours in no way even approaches those!
Excellent writing skills! You have the mechanics down very well.
Even better, a fascinating concept and an interesting premise! Would be interesting to see more of this world, and the creations/creatures in it. And to see what our new-formed god does with the knowledge and power just realized.
Well done!
Excellent writing skills! You have the mechanics down very well.
Even better, a fascinating concept and an interesting premise! Would be interesting to see more of this world, and the creations/creatures in it. And to see what our new-formed god does with the knowledge and power just realized.
Well done!
You've constructed an enthralling tale led by a marveling character. By no means does your writing falter or leave me wanting. There were instances when sentence structure might be tweaked, but they are not a distracting or ill influence on the enjoyment of your work.
I enjoyed your fox protagonist greatly, and I will be with you on every leg of this literary journey.
I enjoyed your fox protagonist greatly, and I will be with you on every leg of this literary journey.
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