Very interesting. Quite unusual approach to the theme. Sci-fi, now I am not very fond of that genre, but still, I liked your story. The wolf is especially interesting character, as he mixes old philosophy and modern technology. Very interesting, I have to say. Great little piece, well written, there are some minor errors, typos, I presume, but all in all the story is quite grand. Very entertaining, I enjoyed reading this.

Thanks

Good story. Adrian really stood out, especially at the end with his thoughts on the universe and 'making jumps'.

*flops to the floor watching the words to see if they will indeed grow to more... very nice story Xeans..

V.

^^ I'm going to break off from my on going series for a while to see how far I can take this

very good... the feeling of being alive in your writing is wonderful isn't it?

V.

Yeah

That was good. I can understand how you could come back to this. very interesting. I hope they make it there ok. It would suck if they didn't