There's a time and a place for guitar noodling, and you've found it, in the first third of the song. Nice transitions in feel as it progresses.

I'd tone down the screech just a little, as it overwhelms the more subtle and interesting background themes, but otherwise nice. I'd fade out he last 20 or so seconds of screech, personally.

Good chunky feedback in the last section.

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Yeah, on the 'finished product', I'll probably have a fade out towards the end.
I might do another version w/ the more 'chunky' types of feedback, b/c I enjoy the juxtaposition of music and feedback elements.

Oh my, the layering is insane!

I love how the high pitched noises sound like they're far in front of everything else, while still being bright undistorted by the other layers...I can't listen to this again, though. It reminds me too much of something terrible.

Thanks and...um, sorry.