
Wouldn't it be awesome if your life goal came to fruition? What if there was an injection that transformed you into a werewolf? That would be like a dream come true! Well, for David, that is just about to happen.
This piece touches on a personal desire of mine: lycanthropy. Like the main character, I have always wanted to be a werewolf. This story delves into what we all wish was possible, a serum that left you more wolf than man! Enjoy! ^_^
This piece touches on a personal desire of mine: lycanthropy. Like the main character, I have always wanted to be a werewolf. This story delves into what we all wish was possible, a serum that left you more wolf than man! Enjoy! ^_^
Category Story / Transformation
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 22.6 kB
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My favorite detail was how David was chosen because he wanted it but also still was excepionally stable. It reminds me of some of our discussions about who we could trust with such a thing like lycanthropy.
This story is really TF heavy which is the point. It's the moment of becoming a werewolf. It gets into detail of his excitement and happiness with the change. Really enjoyable and even makes me think about my werewolf dream and wanting my own injection.
Very well done. I enjoyed reading and proof reading this. Thanks for asking for my two cents.
This story is really TF heavy which is the point. It's the moment of becoming a werewolf. It gets into detail of his excitement and happiness with the change. Really enjoyable and even makes me think about my werewolf dream and wanting my own injection.
Very well done. I enjoyed reading and proof reading this. Thanks for asking for my two cents.
It makes sense to require a psych evaluation for something like that, and yea, our similar opinions on it fit really well into the reality behind the situation. Really glad you enjoyed it and I'm always happy to let you proofread for me. You always have such valuable input! ^_^ Thanks for the assist!
It would be interesting to see the rest of the story- I'm imagining what led to this and all the things that will happen after. But this short does a great job of capturing that critical moment, the moment of transformation. I do love the details such as the mention of a mental evaluation. Presumably after a success like this they would be more open but they would definitely want to be extremely careful with the fist test subject. Very well-written!
when i read the th sull write i can tel you i hate books BUT THIS I WANT THIS IN BOOKKS it was great how did you write the sotorry and well WHO DOES NOT WANT TO BECOME A WEREWOLF ?! XD i think it was a dream of every kid and just it would be awsome if people doesn not destroy the ozone but find out stuff like this THAT WOULD BE EVEN BUTTER ! because if yeas where i can sign in :D ?
TF isn't my thing but I rather like the concept of this, particularly the idea of lycanthropy being something that seems to be a choice and was carefully given to someone who is willing and probably qualified. This was pretty well written so I am interested to see what other stuff you can write. :3
Finally had a chance to read this. Was really fun! I enjoyed being right there with David as he transformed for the first time (and last, possibly? Sounded like the change was permanent) and got to observe and feel all the changes happening in his body. You did a good job of capturing the elation of being able to finally become a werewolf after a lifetime of wanting to do so! I can definitely relate to that lifetime longing as well. Was really happy that the test was successful! I liked the fun details about his new sheath and being a bit embarrassed as well, hehe.
What a sweet story, goes really well with the sequence. Really like how you brought in the mental component here too, that he has to have a certain kind of mental stability to successfully go through the TF.
Guess whatever what kind of comapny produced that serum, they will make a lot of furs happy. ^.=.^
Guess whatever what kind of comapny produced that serum, they will make a lot of furs happy. ^.=.^
I really enjoyed that story Lykanos! Your a good writer with a good handle on descriptive narration. You and I share the same passion for the TF process and I'be also been inspired to write about it; a novel in my case. I'll be sure to share the good parts with you (and everyone of course) I KNOW you'll love it
That was quite the well done transformation story. You covered every little change with amazing detail from how it looked to how it felt to how it worked. It really helped to bring it all to life and made it feel like it could have actually been happening while I read it ^^ It was a very enjoyable read and got me wondering how a dragon transformation would have felt... it was very inspiring work ^^
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