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Quick image for the end of my story, Bon Bon's Acceptance
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/248.....ons-acceptance
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/248.....ons-acceptance
Category Artwork (Digital) / My Little Pony / Brony
Species Horse
Size 632 x 800px
File Size 527.9 kB
While I could easily comment on the actual story I shall do so here instead.
I love both your stories so much!, and all of your amazing art for it is just icing on the cake, though of course all the ones with scary are my favorite. :)
I look forward to any art and stories that follow. good luck!
I love both your stories so much!, and all of your amazing art for it is just icing on the cake, though of course all the ones with scary are my favorite. :)
I look forward to any art and stories that follow. good luck!
God dang this was a good read,I normally don't like reading fanfics or rather I just haven't read many to begin with but this was amazing from start to finish!
There were moments where I legit felt like crying with the characters or laughing with them which is rare for me! Anyways I really like how you did the world building and character development,I might be talking about this story in a really technical way but what I'm saying is that I've read 3 of your fan fics (2 of which are related to this) and none have disappointed not even the smaller more simple ones.
Personally even without the clop parts or even if they were toned down this story would have still held up a lot;tbh I'm also quite impressed with how you can make a simple scene be just as long as a complicated one whille still keeping it super interesting! Hope to see more fan fics and drawings from you!
There were moments where I legit felt like crying with the characters or laughing with them which is rare for me! Anyways I really like how you did the world building and character development,I might be talking about this story in a really technical way but what I'm saying is that I've read 3 of your fan fics (2 of which are related to this) and none have disappointed not even the smaller more simple ones.
Personally even without the clop parts or even if they were toned down this story would have still held up a lot;tbh I'm also quite impressed with how you can make a simple scene be just as long as a complicated one whille still keeping it super interesting! Hope to see more fan fics and drawings from you!
Oh wow! Thank you for the complement! I am so glad that you could enjoy my story! That meas a lot to me. I hope you like the other ones too, lol. But really, that means a lot. Writing is a lot harder then you would think, so it means a lot to me when someone tells me they enjoy my work. <3
Ofcourse and no problem! And trust me I know how hard writing can be it's honestly something I wish I could do myself (might practice that in the future)!
In all honesty as silly as it might sound your stories were very easy to identify with and relatable and not necesseraily because of the human character but because of characters like BonBon and lyra! You have no idea how much I saw myself in their shoes....or rather horseshoes? lmao anyways if I had one tiny criticism is that it felt like it ended a bit abruptly it would have been nice to see how the trio enjoyed their vacation and what happened after they came back from it. But eh it might have just been me getting too invested lol so don't worry I still hold this as one of the best fics I've read easily a 9/10!
Anyways I'm the guy from last nights stream that was asking you a billion questions and followed you on FIMfic just for these stories!
In all honesty as silly as it might sound your stories were very easy to identify with and relatable and not necesseraily because of the human character but because of characters like BonBon and lyra! You have no idea how much I saw myself in their shoes....or rather horseshoes? lmao anyways if I had one tiny criticism is that it felt like it ended a bit abruptly it would have been nice to see how the trio enjoyed their vacation and what happened after they came back from it. But eh it might have just been me getting too invested lol so don't worry I still hold this as one of the best fics I've read easily a 9/10!
Anyways I'm the guy from last nights stream that was asking you a billion questions and followed you on FIMfic just for these stories!
Oh well that's awesome I can't wait to see what you end up writing!
Tbh I just wanna see what funny situations bonbon can be put in since usually she's the one who made me laugh the most! (Believe it or not I liked her from the start,I guess I see myself in her shoes whenever she got flustered over Lyra talking about lewd stuff lmao)
Tbh I just wanna see what funny situations bonbon can be put in since usually she's the one who made me laugh the most! (Believe it or not I liked her from the start,I guess I see myself in her shoes whenever she got flustered over Lyra talking about lewd stuff lmao)
Yup really,sure I might have been sad that she was reacting the way she was but tbh she was just too cute and surprisingly helpful despite her not liking chris at first for me to hate her.
And like I said she made me laugh a bunch when she reacted to Lyra's lewd stories and found her kinda relatable a lot of the time!
And like I said she made me laugh a bunch when she reacted to Lyra's lewd stories and found her kinda relatable a lot of the time!
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