I really love this pic because of the natural environment I did here : 3 especially water... I love it X3E
Another commission for
alty where we see him taking a bath in some waterfalls with its pure, clean and crystalized water =w= looks refreshing that I wanna be there XD
A lot of water in movement, very tricky but worthy to give the shot ; D as well as the fur all wet with the drops and also the transparency of the falls.
Another commission for
alty where we see him taking a bath in some waterfalls with its pure, clean and crystalized water =w= looks refreshing that I wanna be there XDA lot of water in movement, very tricky but worthy to give the shot ; D as well as the fur all wet with the drops and also the transparency of the falls.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1240 x 1654px
File Size 1.51 MB
As promised, here is my comment! :D
The main focus is - of course - the bathing characfter. And yes, you are very good and skilled when it comes to water effects so far... but I will talk about it later.
The character looks dashing, hunky and very handsome. His friendly facial expression and the excellent body build work well together!
There are some minor flaws... his left calf is a bit too massive and his left biceps is simply wrong. ^^" There's a problem with his left shoulder and biceps and the part where the biceps is leading into the chest muscle. BUT IT IS POSSIBLE that his blue tattoo and his hair is distracting here. I am pretty sure that the tattoo is somehow distracting me and... that you did the chest muscle and biceps part better than I think.
Anyway, it is a difficult part... the biceps/chest muscle/shoulder thing. I just wanted to point it out.
On the other side, his abs, hip, waist and thighs are really well done!
About his tail... I dunno how LONG it is... but it must be VERY long. It is going under water on the left side and... getting out of the water in the background (right side)... this is rather confusing and doesn't look so well. ^^"
We should be able to see more of the tail behind his body (BETWEEN THE LEGS!!) or at least underneath the water (transparency effect).
The way the tail behaves doesn't look correct... or it is over 2 meters long (which could be possible).
Yes, the water drop effects are just excellent!! It is a silver shower... and I love how it is raining down and hitting the character's head, shoulder and body. ^^
And the "dripping down" effects are really believable and well done.
The wet hair effect also increases the realism here!
The background is maybe even cooler than the character... or it is at least equal! XD
Seriously, this is a wonderful, magical, beautiful and highly (!!) detailed background. All these fauna... all the plants, rocks and leaves... excellent. This might be one of your most detailed backgrounds, as well!
I have a suggestion, though.
Even in this case, I would suggest to use a slight blurr tool or a blue filter to blurr the "far away" background. I'm talking about the "trees" or "bush like" parts in the upper part and in the center part of the background.
It IS still alright... the background - yet so detailed - does not distract from the character. You did this well! But I still think that a little bit of blue or blurr can enhance the effect of "levels" here. ^^
Well, what can I say... this is a marvellous piece and I can see you LOVED doing it!
There is much love and ambition here.
Carry on, take care and keep working!
EDIT:
I can't hide myself from loving this short speedo/thong... it is very well done and the bulge is magnificent! XD
But as a matter of fact the bulge is neither too big, nor too small... it is well done and the cloth does show a great "wet effect", as well!
^________^
The main focus is - of course - the bathing characfter. And yes, you are very good and skilled when it comes to water effects so far... but I will talk about it later.
The character looks dashing, hunky and very handsome. His friendly facial expression and the excellent body build work well together!
There are some minor flaws... his left calf is a bit too massive and his left biceps is simply wrong. ^^" There's a problem with his left shoulder and biceps and the part where the biceps is leading into the chest muscle. BUT IT IS POSSIBLE that his blue tattoo and his hair is distracting here. I am pretty sure that the tattoo is somehow distracting me and... that you did the chest muscle and biceps part better than I think.
Anyway, it is a difficult part... the biceps/chest muscle/shoulder thing. I just wanted to point it out.
On the other side, his abs, hip, waist and thighs are really well done!
About his tail... I dunno how LONG it is... but it must be VERY long. It is going under water on the left side and... getting out of the water in the background (right side)... this is rather confusing and doesn't look so well. ^^"
We should be able to see more of the tail behind his body (BETWEEN THE LEGS!!) or at least underneath the water (transparency effect).
The way the tail behaves doesn't look correct... or it is over 2 meters long (which could be possible).
Yes, the water drop effects are just excellent!! It is a silver shower... and I love how it is raining down and hitting the character's head, shoulder and body. ^^
And the "dripping down" effects are really believable and well done.
The wet hair effect also increases the realism here!
The background is maybe even cooler than the character... or it is at least equal! XD
Seriously, this is a wonderful, magical, beautiful and highly (!!) detailed background. All these fauna... all the plants, rocks and leaves... excellent. This might be one of your most detailed backgrounds, as well!
I have a suggestion, though.
Even in this case, I would suggest to use a slight blurr tool or a blue filter to blurr the "far away" background. I'm talking about the "trees" or "bush like" parts in the upper part and in the center part of the background.
It IS still alright... the background - yet so detailed - does not distract from the character. You did this well! But I still think that a little bit of blue or blurr can enhance the effect of "levels" here. ^^
Well, what can I say... this is a marvellous piece and I can see you LOVED doing it!
There is much love and ambition here.
Carry on, take care and keep working!
EDIT:
I can't hide myself from loving this short speedo/thong... it is very well done and the bulge is magnificent! XD
But as a matter of fact the bulge is neither too big, nor too small... it is well done and the cloth does show a great "wet effect", as well!
^________^
Indeed, the tail is actually that long, but the idea of making transparent the water even more to show the tail sequence to the otherside might have work well, but I decided not to to keep the blue color on it XD
As for the image in general, indeed XD the background was more of my ambition in this work heheh, I do characters all the time but backgrounds like this not at all. I really love working with the whole thing here, all handmade. And the idea of the bluur effect behind the falls where the tree and some stone areas are was actually a not bad idea : l I don´t know why I haven`t notice that.
And finally, the bulge XDDD well you know me, I´m in counter of oversizes and unrealistic sizes. I rather more a realistic and good suggestive pic like this ; ) Thanks a lot for liking it : D better than the first commission I did of Alty, huh? improvement made my best of me ; )
Thanks a lot for commenting this man : D I really appreciate it! ^ ^
As for the image in general, indeed XD the background was more of my ambition in this work heheh, I do characters all the time but backgrounds like this not at all. I really love working with the whole thing here, all handmade. And the idea of the bluur effect behind the falls where the tree and some stone areas are was actually a not bad idea : l I don´t know why I haven`t notice that.
And finally, the bulge XDDD well you know me, I´m in counter of oversizes and unrealistic sizes. I rather more a realistic and good suggestive pic like this ; ) Thanks a lot for liking it : D better than the first commission I did of Alty, huh? improvement made my best of me ; )
Thanks a lot for commenting this man : D I really appreciate it! ^ ^
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