yes this feeling of being vulnerable... aye...

Second panel looks bad asssss good work

thanks much. That means a lot

The left side panel is marvellous!!
Those shadows are perfect

aww thankies

hm, I thought magician never revel their tricks (but thanks for the explanation)

oh he had a magic negating collar arround his neck, so....

It seems that Eternal has a dark side after all

yeah but the darkness isn´t evil... only what you want to see in it

Just for dramatics

true^^

You look really cool on the bottom left panel :D:D:D !!!

Thank you very much

Magnificent!


Das Panel links unten is einfach unglaublich gemacht, meisterhafte Schattierung :D!!!!

Thanks a lot

Danke sehr. Ich hoffe ich werde noch besser darin^^

that shading on Eternal! hoooooly fuck thats amazing

thanks aww

toll^^

Danke verbindlichst^^

hehe

Sei nicht zu hart zu ihnen :D

Und das Panel unten links :D .. gneial gemacht ^^

Danke. Ich finde es auch nicht schlecht. Will noch besser darin werden. Muss noch mehr über Schwarzflächen und Schattierungen lernen.

hab früher ne zeitlang gern damit gearbeitet abe rnur mit sehr starkn kontrasten ^^ also kaum übergängen ^^

sehr herausfordernd, so was

jupp ^^ das kann ich bezeugen ^^

I know you are straight me lord, but.......that second panel makes me want to give Eternal a blush worthy smootch on the cheek. The last panel just makes me want to just give him smootches and a few nibbles on his rat ears too~ He looks so dashingly handsome in the darkness, his face so composed and regal, his face kissed by the shadows embrace. And goodness gracious, that cheeky smirk on his cocky face is just screaming with cuteness! Seeing this side of him would make Sebastian melt where he stands, blushing madly and concentrating looking away, biting his own tail to keep any composure to not just admire his face right now and babble incoherently about the rat. >/////< Why'd you have to make him unbelievably cute when he smug like that? I swear, if he was teasing Sebastian with that face, right in his personal space, he'd have a red croco on his hands that would not shut up with his incessant babbling and would barely be able to stand. X3 If he looked at croco with that handsome 'heart stopper' face in panel 2, right in Sebastian's face....well......Eternal would witness his first fainted croco!

Don and Zharr look besides themselves though. I'm sure that Eternal will leave these two with a parting gift, or even give them a gift himself, just so they can all have....something to laugh about...more to Don and Zharr's expense. >:3 They look quite cute looking so flabbergasted and annoyed, with thier fluffy barechests exposed for any teasing and thier exposed armpits ripe for fun. Gives a croc many idea. ^^ Plus, thier feet are still exposed. I think its time for a game of This Little Bear and This Little Doggy with thier toes! Seriously, I just love Eternal's 'cheeky bastard' face, it just brimming with boastfulness. And that dark and mysterious face, showing all of his handsome features made me melt like pudding when I saw it.

Anyway, let me shut up about that handsome rat~ Tails are so handy for many practical uses, including stealing! Or cuddling and startling a rat for that matter, especially if its ticklish like Sebastian's.

Hahaha!

If Sebastian would melt, it would take ages to freeze this liquid and to remodell him again^^

I believe, I didn´t a bad job on Eternal´s reappearence becasue I really wanted to show him in a "I am back again" style. it took about two and a half hours to draw the black shadows and I thought sometimes. I hope I don´t srew it up. I put all my efforts into this one panel and judging by the comments, I would say, it worked out well. That is what makes me so happy about drawing comics. Telling good stories added with good drawn panels with massive use of action, drama and emotions.

Heheh Clever ; )

I gotta say that Eternal looks pretty awesome with these outfit of his : D Nice detail with that jacket and that awesome hood that gives him a mystery touch!

Now I wonder what would it be his next move? : 3 It looks really good so far, take your time for the pages´development ; )

thanks me Lord^^

Yes i like Eternal´s outfit like it is now. He is not really a fullfletched wizard, but also a rogue, and isn´t a rogue at the same time, he could also be kind of a Paladin or a knight without an armor, that was it what I wished to express with this outfit of Eternal

That´s pretty awesome man : ) really.

The design looks really good that I wouldn´t mind to try drawing my first time with a rat if I could draw a cool one like Eternal : 3

that honors me, me Lord *bows*

Eternal´s clothes should be "neutral" like they can adapt to the situation they are needed in.

remember always tie up the tail too x3 :3

yyyup^^

I want ticklish for next page

hm maybe or maybe on the second following page

The page looks great, you know how to present your character well. I'll have the details for the next page today as soon as I can.

roger, doc^^
and thanks. I thought Eternal should have a similar reaapearence like Solletico

squiek!!

I see now he used his tail to get the key although idk how he was able to use it to get free

this is to explaine on the following pages^^

ah I see ^-^

Nice shadow

that is what Eternal is originally... an embodyment of the emptyness inside the shadows^^

It is the first time I did it right to draw a character appearing out of the shadows like that. As I said, I learned much new techniques while drawing this comic throughout the past year. I looked for many references in western comics and eastern mangas to have something to learn from. I take this project really serious.
It is sad, that I don´t have assistants who do the shading and coloring like the professional comic artists have them^^;

aye that´s true.
The artists and their assistants are working together. Most of the time, the artist himself/herself focuses on the pencil drawing of the page, the artists do the inking and shading
Otherwise it would be impossible to print awhole comic book with about 30 pages within two months

And good luck for your future comic

I second your comliments, stunning

Ah, would've never imagined about his tail. Great strategy!

hehe thanks
the details on how it happened are up to follow soon

TOTAL KLASSE Arbeit mit dem shading, absolut spitze!!

Aww Vielen Dank *verbeugung*

I love the dark shadow of Eternal's eyes sticking out it's so mischievious : D nice work once again ; p

thanks much

I believe the line is: "Struggle all you want, your feeble skills are no match for the power of the Dark Side."

Haha! Could fit in here perfectly

This is your best page, no doubt.
Not only that, but revealing how he escaped is also really cleaver.
Great work, splendid!

Eternal bows deeply
that means a lot to me

Ah, it gets better and better. I notice also that they're both trying to use magic to escape in that one panel.

Great work, the wait is killing me. :-P Evil bears deserve tortures.

Indeed they deserve to harvest what they´ve seeded.

i know how the waitin for good things can be annoying

Wonder if I'm the only one still rooting for Solletico and Zharr ;w;

hm good question^^

This is by far my favorite page you've done. I'll join the others in saying how amazing Eternal looks coming out of the shadows. It also balances out the piece well to have two very light panels and two very dark ones. ^^ Also the detail on Eternal's outfit is

I love how much you get me. we're pretty much simpatico on the whole thing. Eternal is definitely meant for the shadows and does him justice.

Hahaha, you and I are usually pretty dang simpatico on all our opinions and tastes ;3

aww thanks for the compliment^^
yes Eternal is a creature that like being in the shadows^^

Omgosh I love that last panel. The expression, just love your character so much. Definitely and idol XD such a trickster!

aww thanks much

This is awesome, Eternal looks so bad ass!

hehe thanks much^^