i like the beat at the beginning. i like the second sound you put in but i think it needed an extra note . also for the third set of sounds (notes) like a tech piano, i think way you decided to change the sound with the different notes didn't go as well with the first two beats. i think perhaps if you put the notes in a different order they would have meshed more harmoniously. then it starts to really get going and the anticipation for what comes next builds untill second 40, where that random video game sound comes in, and i think killed however much we were looking forward to what might come next. it's not that the sound by itself is unpleasant, or couldn't do well in a different piece or spot, but it just sounded too random to fit well into the piece you were creating. the second time you put in the "video game" sound it went with the rest a bit better, but was still kinda random. it was cool to hear you kinda playing with the third sound(the notes like a tech piano i mentioned before), then the anticipation builds again, only to be interrupted by a third video game sound. then it gets cool, very cool. i liked the rest of it till the end. the very end was kind of weak, but many artists of this type do something like that at the end of their songs, possibly leading them into something else, so i can understand. this is actually quite good for a first submission. i hope my critique will be helpful and not at all crude or mean. please be encouraged to continue making music and learning.: )
~hinote.

I would like it if you could add more "Counters" in your comment (i.e "1:40 sucks monkey balls plz redo")

but I thank you eternally for the critique ^^