It's so sweet... and sad at the same time ;A;

awww, thank you love ^////^

... *hug*

*huggles back* Im feeling a bit better today then I was yesterday ^^ *wags tail*

*wags tail* That's good ^-^

yes it is *cuddles*

*pushes you over and lays on top of you, laying my head on your chest* ^///^

*puts my arms around you* If we stay like this long enough, my depression will go by no problem ^^

*wags tail* Works for me ^///^

and me too ^////^ *nuzzles your neck*

*purrs in your ear*

*giggles* Your too cute when you do that ^////^

Hee! *cuddles you*

I wish we could cuddles forever ^^

Me too *hugs you tighter*

hehe, now im not going to let go XD

*purrs in your ear* Good

*giggles* You tease. You know I like hearing purrs, don't you?

I do too! *looks at cat purring in my ear*

hehe. *nuzzles*

This is really beautiful, I love it, great work! Your poems really have an amazing ability to create emotions *sniffle* Just so awesome

awww, im sorry, I didn't mean to make you get all emotional *huggles*
I always try to make my poems and that like that so people like them ^^

Its fine,
You've really got an amazing talent for poetry. *huggles back* and for the record I love this poem hehe, It really made me feel about times in my life and to me, if a poem does that, its amazing, and all your poems do that. :)
P.S. I was messing with PS earlier and sent you a picture to the MSN address on your page, if you get a chance to look, lemme know what you think :)
And again, keep up the amazing work! <3

you really think so? I always just put things down with how I was feeling, and tried to make it sound good. Thanks alot ^^ *huggles again* Thank you os much for the kind words ^///^
I'll keep up the poetry indeed if theres actually some people outt here that like it ^^

Wow Nice... You have real promise. I would suggest working on your next line slams a little more though.. Seems like your trying for a slam style.. Am I right? Any ways.. If you want I can give you some pointers in line slams.

lol, im not up to date on poem terminology XD
I only do things like this when I feel like it, so its more of just a pass time. But sure, I could always use some help to make my stuff better ^^
Thanks ^.^

Ok so this is somthing Sheri D taught me.. When you do a line series like this

Stronge enough to replace
My too weak one

To get a much harder and deeper impact of that large differential change in ones self, you may want to add a little emphasis on replase by repeating it in the next line and when read saying it with more power.

Stronge enough to replace
Replace my too weak one

Another tip is to use much more powerful words in description. Such as replaceing weak with fragile. When read aloud a more solom empathetic tone does wonders.

Stronge enough to replace
Replace my too fragile one

And last but not least for powerfull get the idea across slamming you may want to expairement with repeating what your talking about in the change or in you case replacment such as.

Stronge enough to replace
Replace my too fragile of heart

And there you have it.. The only things I can see off hand that you can work on.. Hope this helps you to delve into your own progressive style of slam.

ok, thank you for that ^^
I shall try to use those on my next poems that im going to be working on at some point, when I become inspired again ^^.
I have more coming out, but their just from a year or so back, so their gonna be not so good. But im going to edit them later on, and resubmit them updated.

Cool. Can't wait to see them.

well, I put all of my old ones up now, but their in my scrap section, so feel free to check them out. But they aren't the best thing I've done, but I like some of them ^^

You truly do have an amazing poetic skill... Something I wasnt ever very good at... Words dun like me... But I will have to post the one poem I do still have one day.
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thank you love ^^
I don't believe that, im sure your good at poems and such. But I can't wait to read the one that you made ^^