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Category All / All
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File Size 40.4 kB
ready?
okay.
your style is hard to crit because it is so very stylized, and it has a great unique taste to it.
HOWEVER.
on this piece particularly, it becomes obvious that there are things that could be improved.
you anatomy is often good, but can sometimes become wonky, like here, where her crotch looks like it's... not centered on her body, and her body itself is rather loafy and not very distinct, particularly the bottom half. her legs are kind of just... there, and it seems like you didn't know how to draw crossed legs, so you just kinda faked it.
urgh i'm sorry i sound mean, i'm not used to this but you asked for crit. ><'' so, next time try looking at a quick ref to sort of get the look of the pose[i hardly EVER EVER use refs, but if i am trying something i'm not sure about, i will look it up and take a quick look]
the pawfeets here are also lacking, as they're sort of... ovals with lines for toes, yanno? there are ways to do undefined toes, but this way doesn't quite work. for example,
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1486088/ the feets on the grey cat here look nice!
lastly, the tail here looks lifeless and squished and dead. i don't want to pet it.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1676703/ but the tail on this goat looks nice and fluffy!
yes, i do keep in mind that this was just a sketch trade, but the sketch, to me, is the most important part of a drawing(usually)
and if the sketch doesn't have the "umph" it should- the finished piece can't either!
i hope i've helped in some way :>
<3
okay.
your style is hard to crit because it is so very stylized, and it has a great unique taste to it.
HOWEVER.
on this piece particularly, it becomes obvious that there are things that could be improved.
you anatomy is often good, but can sometimes become wonky, like here, where her crotch looks like it's... not centered on her body, and her body itself is rather loafy and not very distinct, particularly the bottom half. her legs are kind of just... there, and it seems like you didn't know how to draw crossed legs, so you just kinda faked it.
urgh i'm sorry i sound mean, i'm not used to this but you asked for crit. ><'' so, next time try looking at a quick ref to sort of get the look of the pose[i hardly EVER EVER use refs, but if i am trying something i'm not sure about, i will look it up and take a quick look]
the pawfeets here are also lacking, as they're sort of... ovals with lines for toes, yanno? there are ways to do undefined toes, but this way doesn't quite work. for example,
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1486088/ the feets on the grey cat here look nice!
lastly, the tail here looks lifeless and squished and dead. i don't want to pet it.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1676703/ but the tail on this goat looks nice and fluffy!
yes, i do keep in mind that this was just a sketch trade, but the sketch, to me, is the most important part of a drawing(usually)
and if the sketch doesn't have the "umph" it should- the finished piece can't either!
i hope i've helped in some way :>
<3
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