Have you...seen official artwork of this character? Being disproportionate is literally her thing. Considering she's supposed to represent old cartoon characters and all that.

Instead of just saying it's wonky, can you tell me exactly what the problem is. That's the sort of thing that helps people ya know.

So virtually all of it is wrong but you won't tell me how to actually fix it?
That's the sort of thing doesn't help anybody man. Let me give you some advice now.
If you're gonna give a critique, give a legitimate critique by not being rude about it.
Now before you start saying "Grow some thick skin", that sort of stuff is destructive to a young artist starting out.
Now take what I said and use it properly.

And it's YOUR art, not mine. You can't be blind to your own work.

You completely missed the point.

"Actually, you're wrong. Yes, she's supposed to be a spin-off of old cartoon characters, but even then they STILL had a sense of anatomy to them."

Also I think you contradicted yourself here.

You have a character who's arms are as big as her body and you're asking me to be proportionate. Also you still haven't told me how to fix it.

Take a long, hard look at it, and then tell me what you think is wrong with it.

Look, since you won't tell how to fix it then I can not fix it. I do not see it and I can not suddenly see something in my work by just staring at it or over thinking it. Please stop commenting or provide your actual criticism.

Oh well, then. If can't see the problems in your own art, I don't know what to tell you. But I'll tell you this. Get a better handle on line art and coloring. Take a look at my gallery, you'll get it.

See if you said something like THAT, then our conversation would have gone a lot better.
Also I'm doing a lineless style.

Still, you REALLY need to work on your critique giving. It doesn't help at all. I can take criticism but if you don't understand how to give it then you're not helping.

So if I can give you some criticism, you seem to like art of women with overly stylized bodies. Where boobs and hips bigger than the females stomach. While that may be your style, you also still need to understand that proportions are everything (ironic). It can take people out of a drawing if you all you care about is sexual overtones. Also work on your hands, I see that some of them don't look right prospectively wise