I love the bass! It just makes me want to get up and start fucking raving. Well, either that or pick up a chair and throw it at someone.

lol do both? thnx! check around in my gallery too, i have some other good ones in there!

Hmm... I feel like you've got it sounding right, but you need a melody. It sounds monotonous at first, and the key changes introduced later on just aren't interesting enough to make up for it. Trance needs a catchy melody to work, and you just haven't got that going on.

My advice is to just spend an entire day composing melodies, or messing around with a keyboard to get a feel for which notes compliment each other well, and which don't. You have a good ear. You should catch on quick enough.

finnally abit of constructive critisism. lol, some of my tracks i rarely mean to kindof have them monotonous though, this one is one of them. im gonna try with more melodies and get off hardstyle abit

That's probably a good idea.