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Asomatous 1, Travellers: 11 page
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Hello there!
We finished 11 page. And after this piece we'll accept new schedule, hooray! (read below).
Well, Shakur is like father for Idow, and she acknowledges his authority. When they both have some dissidences, Idow will never win, because she knows: Shakur is always right. But she can be some kind of boss for Ruby, because they are really like sister and brother to each other. What about Nyorut? Here is not all that simple. Nyorut thinks that Shakur has a pressure to Idow and he doesn't like it, so he defence sahas-girl from his influence. But he has no idea that they both are happy with each other.
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NEW SCHEDULE ►
12 page: 10.05
13 page: 10.15
14 page: 10.25
15 page: 11.05
16 page: 11.15
PS
Thanks alot to
Bone-Daddy who helped us with editing of this page texts. We hope that it's easier to read now :)
Hello there!
We finished 11 page. And after this piece we'll accept new schedule, hooray! (read below).
Well, Shakur is like father for Idow, and she acknowledges his authority. When they both have some dissidences, Idow will never win, because she knows: Shakur is always right. But she can be some kind of boss for Ruby, because they are really like sister and brother to each other. What about Nyorut? Here is not all that simple. Nyorut thinks that Shakur has a pressure to Idow and he doesn't like it, so he defence sahas-girl from his influence. But he has no idea that they both are happy with each other.
Thanks for your support on Patreon, we can work more on our project because of your help!
NEW SCHEDULE ►
12 page: 10.05
13 page: 10.15
14 page: 10.25
15 page: 11.05
16 page: 11.15
PS
Thanks alot to
Bone-Daddy who helped us with editing of this page texts. We hope that it's easier to read now :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1200 x 1701px
File Size 1.19 MB
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New page! It was becoming hard to wait XD
So the family is more complex than it seems. Idow is not just the sweet girl we saw in the first pages, and there are strong relations between them all. I must say, this page manages to raise more and more questions. I hunger for more! :D
Also, there are so many expressions, so much body language, it's all perfect
So the family is more complex than it seems. Idow is not just the sweet girl we saw in the first pages, and there are strong relations between them all. I must say, this page manages to raise more and more questions. I hunger for more! :D
Also, there are so many expressions, so much body language, it's all perfect
I can't... stop gazing that little bit of the boobies.. *face palm*... It's getting the attention.
On the side notes, well, I am a bit confused by who and who's talking until I went back and check their skin colors.
Well, to say the least, the siblings do quarrel on trying to stay and blend in the society. That will be their struggle.
On the side notes, well, I am a bit confused by who and who's talking until I went back and check their skin colors.
Well, to say the least, the siblings do quarrel on trying to stay and blend in the society. That will be their struggle.
I'm loving this so far. Oh and Shakur is a bit of a dick, but I get his point about NOT wanting to speak. I get the fact that while it would help them by speaking, at the same time they might not want the attention that it would draw.
A few things...
"You know perfectly well that I can't read their wacky signs!"
Idow is illiterate/dyslexic?
"I hate making eyes at people who I’m not interested in or smiling to them all the time. I don’t like them at all."
Idow has some issues now? On a quick psychological look over she comes over as someone with an avoidant personality, either one that's natural or enforced due to something that has happened in her past. Also, she hates or has issues with face to face communiaction? That makes it seem like she even more issues (like if I must say something like a type of AS).
"I only liked that girl with the *pretzel* on her head, she was cuter than the others."
OK slight personal nitpick here. It took me a little while to work out what was going on here with this dialog, since it refers to things on the pervious page. Looking back I did see that there was a child in one panel wearing what looked like a "Tam O' Shanter" style cap, then put two and two together. Granted Idow might not know the name of the type of cap, but would still surely know that its a hat or cap? Granted she might compare it to a food maybe due to its shape, but at first glance as a reader my thoughts where "where was the child with the baked snack on her head?"
As I said it's a nitpick.
Oh and I like the way that Idow is wearing her top in the lower part of the page. That be one versatile bit of clothing.
A few things...
"You know perfectly well that I can't read their wacky signs!"
Idow is illiterate/dyslexic?
"I hate making eyes at people who I’m not interested in or smiling to them all the time. I don’t like them at all."
Idow has some issues now? On a quick psychological look over she comes over as someone with an avoidant personality, either one that's natural or enforced due to something that has happened in her past. Also, she hates or has issues with face to face communiaction? That makes it seem like she even more issues (like if I must say something like a type of AS).
"I only liked that girl with the *pretzel* on her head, she was cuter than the others."
OK slight personal nitpick here. It took me a little while to work out what was going on here with this dialog, since it refers to things on the pervious page. Looking back I did see that there was a child in one panel wearing what looked like a "Tam O' Shanter" style cap, then put two and two together. Granted Idow might not know the name of the type of cap, but would still surely know that its a hat or cap? Granted she might compare it to a food maybe due to its shape, but at first glance as a reader my thoughts where "where was the child with the baked snack on her head?"
As I said it's a nitpick.
Oh and I like the way that Idow is wearing her top in the lower part of the page. That be one versatile bit of clothing.
Thank you for your comment :)
Yes, yes! Idow is illiterate. She had a very... Unusual childhood, if I may say so. No one taught her to read or write, so she is feeling uncomfortable in the big cities, like Sovaum.
She has some problems also, yes, especially with communication. She looks more or less social, but it's not any close to her actual feelings, that is hidden deep inside her soul.
She'll show her true nature soon! This girl is a box of Pandora.
Yes, yes! Idow is illiterate. She had a very... Unusual childhood, if I may say so. No one taught her to read or write, so she is feeling uncomfortable in the big cities, like Sovaum.
She has some problems also, yes, especially with communication. She looks more or less social, but it's not any close to her actual feelings, that is hidden deep inside her soul.
She'll show her true nature soon! This girl is a box of Pandora.
Oh, and I need to say a few things about that *pretzel* girl - Idow has a very strange associations. She is also inaccurate about people's age, so she can say 'that's a girl' about any woman, even is she is older than herself.
So, she spoke about Teresis when she said 'girl with the *pretzel* oh her head'. She meant her funny hairstyle, which reminded her baked snack x)
So, she spoke about Teresis when she said 'girl with the *pretzel* oh her head'. She meant her funny hairstyle, which reminded her baked snack x)
Sure! Here you go : http://acomics.ru/~asomatous
I hope it will be helpful for you ^^
I hope it will be helpful for you ^^
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