:reading: hey there my friends anyways yeah title says all this is my version of jeff the killer but made some slight changes to his outfit while keeping some of the original designs how he looks so i made his hoody have zipper to make it a hoody jacket, have half opened to to show his black shirt under it and made him have boots under his black pants and for reference for jeff from this pic i liked http://kyoichii.deviantart.com/art/.....llab-555214544 i need pic which of his hairstyle to use i picked the easiest one that i can draw since lot people drawn him and i liked kyoichii's style of jeff so heres a link to him his art is kool http://kyoichii.deviantart.com/ and i liked this da users here http://euphobea.deviantart.com/ version of jeff too heres link http://euphobea.deviantart.com/art/.....ller-549125107 u should check her out her stuffs kool

now me my boyfriend  themasterstevo31 made our revision story for jeff while keeping some parts from the original story like bullies and party part,moving part but made some alteration to make it better and more possible,reasonable and more explanation stuff too

step.1 change the neighborhood environment we change it to like a local neighborhood thats sorta safe but not safe from bullies living in the neighborhood
step.2 change the age of jeff and liu,the bullies we made jeff age be 16 cuz thats more possible to get in trouble and juvenile like and get drama in life,liu be the older brother like 18-19 or age 20 and the bullies will be age 17 cuz that make seem more acting foolish and childish for there age
step.3 a more possible reason for him go insane slowly hmmm we made him have a one true friend that he cared for more then jane and when he loses his one true friend it makes him go mad slowly and when his brother liu takes blame for him to go to juvenal hall in his place it gets worse and other possible thing to add is maybe one there parents were unstable maybe it be the dad but he controlled his unstableness well and was able cure himself but maybe it passed on to jeff when he was born and he didn't know it and neither did jeff and also this adding is feeling non was there for him anymore mean ever since he lost his friend made feel unstable and the only one there for him now is his brother but since he took blame for him that made him more unstable and get worse slowly
step 4. a more possible reason for him to get pale white skin and lossing eye-leds hmmmm well far i know we made his losing eye-leds parts happen when he was put on fire at the birthday party he attended the same one his mother made him go to like happen when his burning on fire when the bullies ruined his moment of fun/peace to forget sad side he faced of his brother liu going to juvenal hall in his place besides loosing his only friend and when his at the hospital doctors tried there best to fix him and repair his eye-led but only fixed half way when doing sergrurey to fix him from the burns cuz some parts the skin of eye-led were to damaged and for pale white skin it might be way better if he made the deal with the devil if the devil visited him when his in the process of slowly dyeing if the devil came in disguise as a doctor and when they shake hands to seal the deal his transformation effect be he gets on fire thus making chain a reaction changing his skin color and form after shaking hands for the moment when his parents visit him they see how he looks ask about the surgery when seeing his white and asking is he alright in the head but he'll still carve a smile when his home don't worry that be the same
step 5. a better reason to kill his parents and possibly his brother too hmmm we me and bf think its better if jeff felt betrayed by his own parents when the mom tried tell the dad get the gun or something else like telling him get the phone to call mental doctor from the asylum maybe they ended up sending him to asylum? to get help buuuut it didn't work cuz he escaped at night and maybe at night he killed his parents as for liu we made him kill out love or did to protect him from the painful/sad and dad side of the world but it didn't really kill him just left him slowly die in process and left before the copes came?

anyways yeah those r the possible revision concept of his story so far and for possible plot twist for his brother liu survives too cuz doctors operated on him immediately but still they weren't the risk how it danger him when operating him soon possible and also liu will also make a deal with the devil but without him knowing he did that i can think for possible plot twist involving liu surviving in our revision concept stuff :sherlock: yeah i know the revision idea for story might not be liked by others here but i know there be others and some who will like the revision story idea concept and everyone has there own version of him or there own revision story idea for him at least this be a better idea concept for jeffs story then his original story which crapy/dole with somethings that didn't work and stuff weren't reasonable for him to be what he is

:judge: note i only like how jeff looks in many art style only and i like his design only like clothing and hairstyle,image in drawn pics and i like some parts his story of his history/backstory like the part when he moved and the party part and how the bullies made him snap to kill and losing his brother by taking blame to go juvenal hall in jeffs place instead it seemed a possible reson how it made him go mad to get pay back or something like that besides the him on fire part his hospital part when showing how he looks now after the result and giving himself a slit mouth smile but those r the only parts I like in his story but as for the rest part his story made it seemed little dole/crapy cuz the bullies were on year younger them him when there in a ritch neighborhood so sometimes me and my bf make our own version revision addition of him for mostly our version of him but we keep some parts his original concept and outfit stuff and some parts his story anyways blabla on other parts enough side

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