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After a long day I decided to draw and created this Sketch.
I will use this as a base to create my first character Ταυ (Tau)
Please tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
This should be a Utahraptor
I_Love_Critique
I will use this as a base to create my first character Ταυ (Tau)
Please tell me if I'm doing something wrong.
This should be a Utahraptor
I_Love_CritiqueCategory Artwork (Digital) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Dinosaur
Size 1280 x 1100px
File Size 272.9 kB
Listed in Folders
Here via I <3 Critique: Well, it's kinda hard to comment on something when it's still in a preliminary state, but let's see what we got.
The muzzle looks rather short for a Utah raptor, though it's hard to pinpoint exactly why: I think the bump of the eyebrow is making the skull seem longer than it really is, which makes the muzzle seem shorter in comparison.... going by measurements of the proportions of the end of the muzzle to the eye to the back of the head, it seems on the mark. going by this for reference:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:.....or_updated.png Look at the way the ridge along the top of muzzle joins with the the eyebrow/eyesocket, giving a much more streamlined profile. That's probably it.
Anyway: looks pretty boss so far... I don't envy you having to draw all those teeth. Hope this helps some. X3
PS: if it would help, I could do a redline to show what I mean.
The muzzle looks rather short for a Utah raptor, though it's hard to pinpoint exactly why: I think the bump of the eyebrow is making the skull seem longer than it really is, which makes the muzzle seem shorter in comparison.... going by measurements of the proportions of the end of the muzzle to the eye to the back of the head, it seems on the mark. going by this for reference:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:.....or_updated.png Look at the way the ridge along the top of muzzle joins with the the eyebrow/eyesocket, giving a much more streamlined profile. That's probably it.
Anyway: looks pretty boss so far... I don't envy you having to draw all those teeth. Hope this helps some. X3
PS: if it would help, I could do a redline to show what I mean.
Thank you very much, I really appreciate the help :D
I'll try to redo the muzzle and work with some new references I just found on the internet with longer muzzles.
I thank you for the offer for a redline. It wouldn't hurt to understand what you mean, but you already helped me a lot. If you can spare some time, it would be great :3 , If not I wont be mad :)
I'll try to redo the muzzle and work with some new references I just found on the internet with longer muzzles.
I thank you for the offer for a redline. It wouldn't hurt to understand what you mean, but you already helped me a lot. If you can spare some time, it would be great :3 , If not I wont be mad :)
I have made a update of this sketch here, if you are interested:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17826226/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17826226/
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